Loneliness

Right now I feel like exploding I have so many words to voice yet I have none at all Not a single word can illustrate this feeling It is dread latched together with confusion and regret But it is still much better then the happiness of depression I'm more afraid of my own beam then my tears I don't know what to do or why I'm afraid that whatever joy I capture will be lost I don't want to feel empty anymore I ask for direction But everyone evacuates from me So I feel bitter and alone Alone, all alone Nobody here with me That’s what it appears to be The world is great I’m lame, everyone shoves me away I am lonely

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/14/2015 11:21:00 PM

NIA, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/14/2015 2:37:00 PM

Hi Nia, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita

Skat A

Date: 12/14/2015 11:37:00 AM

Nia, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/14/2015 9:09:00 AM

- Nia welcome to P - Soup, hope to see you again in the New Year 2016 - A moving and sad poem - Enjoy reading your poems today - Now that the time is near....I want to wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas for you and your loved ones - hugs // Anne-Lise :)