Olusegun Arowolo Poet Monorhyme

Loneliness

This state I could no longer bear,
For long, life has not been so fair ,
Left alone with no one to care,
This I despair, this I despair.

I dream of living without pain,
death has made this to be in vain,
Loneliness runs in me like train,
I`m not insane,I`m not insane.



CONTEST:"Monotetra" sponsored by Kim Merryman

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Shaz Cheesman July 21, 2013 at 1:43 AM Great poem Olusequn - really enjoyed the flow and the emotion of the words...Shaz

Karen Anglesey July 11, 2013 at 6:41 PM You highlighted these emotions very well...Loneliness, pain and despair that could easily drive one to the brink of insanity. Congratulations on your win :)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole July 11, 2013 at 9:33 AM Congrats on your well deserved win. AO

John Posey July 10, 2013 at 5:36 PM Nicely done, my friend... This one deserved its win.... Jake

Poet Destroyer A July 9, 2013 at 9:42 PM olusegun, Congrats In Kim's "Monotetra" contest....take care...LINDA

Joyce Johnson July 9, 2013 at 8:24 PM Congratulations on your mono. Love, Joyce

Kim Merryman July 9, 2013 at 12:00 PM Olusegon, such a sad write. Good job with the form. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi July 9, 2013 at 11:27 AM You really got the point across that sometimes life feels too much to bear!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Barbara Gorelick June 28, 2013 at 8:20 PM Sad poem..I enjoyed the read but wished I could give you a hug. BG

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Andrea Dietrich June 28, 2013 at 7:23 PM you did well with the form. A sad poem!

April Gabriella June 28, 2013 at 6:58 PM I really like this. Good luck in the contest.