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Loneliness

The pen aches to touch the paper To write about loneliness and longing But the hand stops it, holds it back For it knows not the pain of solitude It has the company Of another hand…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/18/2011 6:46:00 AM
usually loneliness is depicted in love related poems of separation and the like...but such a simple theory u have put is indeed marvellous n makes me think of simple uncomplicated explanation of so many things....
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Date: 7/18/2011 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations Ali in the contest of Brian Strand "A Free Choice" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2011 4:12:00 PM
Very beautiful and thought evoking, Afroze, Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 7/16/2011 2:04:00 PM
yes, the isolation once shared will evaporate, Afroze
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Date: 7/16/2011 1:40:00 PM
swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
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Date: 7/16/2011 1:39:00 PM
brilliant! I love this! congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/16/2011 11:35:00 AM
Congrats Afroze on your terrific third place win with this dynamic delight poetry luv..enjoy..
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Date: 7/16/2011 10:04:00 AM
wow, VERY interesting one. LOVE it. Congrats.
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Date: 7/16/2011 7:50:00 AM
Really clever and surprising. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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