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Loneliness

I wander the desert alone The force the source the sand The still the hush the peace Sitting wishing for his scent I ponder too much i guess But no i think not at dawn I just close my eyes an' dream And so in phase i gaze an' look To find to hurry to bind My memories in a split But i fail because truth is so far I heave and rile although i try I guess its life its loneliness Its passion and stress October, 10, 2018

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Date: 4/10/2019 10:00:00 AM
Glad I saw this one, Talin! Vehemently written. I guess I'm a recluse because I don't suffer loneliness (Really) /|\
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 4/10/2019 11:44:00 AM
Lucky u :)
Date: 1/21/2019 9:27:00 AM
Sad and beautiful, Talin.. Fran
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Date: 12/19/2018 10:26:00 AM
Talin...lovely poem...unexpected doors will open...your light will shine thru!
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 12/19/2018 10:34:00 AM
Hello James my friend , thank you for these lovely wishes , things changed already;)
Date: 10/14/2018 9:09:00 AM
Deep and emotive poem, I felt your words...
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 10/14/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thank you :;)
Date: 10/11/2018 5:53:00 PM
I enjoyed seeing your take on the challenge, wandering the desert alone WEll done . This is one I need to hurry and try!!
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 10/12/2018 3:20:00 AM
Thankx
Date: 10/11/2018 7:06:00 AM
ohh, a wrenching poem beautifully crafted, talin!... winning wishes..huggs
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 10/11/2018 8:18:00 AM
We meet again ,, its good to be back Thankx ,,, my pleasure
Date: 10/11/2018 5:33:00 AM
Not always, well i guess it differs from a person to other but thats my fate so far... my pleasure
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Date: 10/10/2018 6:30:00 PM
Hello Talin Kalishian, it is so nice to meet you. Yes life is lonely and stressful as well. Have a nice evening my friend.
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