Loneliness

I wander the desert alone 
The force the source the sand
The still the hush the peace
Sitting wishing for his scent
I ponder too much i guess
But no i think not at dawn
I just close my eyes an' dream
And so in phase i gaze an' look
To find to hurry to bind
My memories in a split
But i fail because truth is so far
I heave and rile although i try
I guess its life its loneliness
Its passion and stress 

October, 10, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 10:00 AM
Glad I saw this one, Talin! Vehemently written. I guess I'm a recluse because I don't suffer loneliness (Really) /|\
Kalishian Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 11:44 AM
Lucky u :)
Grasso Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 9:27 AM
Sad and beautiful, Talin.. Fran
Goff Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 10:26 AM
Talin...lovely poem...unexpected doors will open...your light will shine thru!
Kalishian Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 10:34 AM
Hello James my friend , thank you for these lovely wishes , things changed already;)
One Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 9:09 AM
Deep and emotive poem, I felt your words...
Kalishian Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Thank you :;)
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 5:53 PM
I enjoyed seeing your take on the challenge, wandering the desert alone WEll done . This is one I need to hurry and try!!
Kalishian Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 3:20 AM
Thankx
Onclaud Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 7:06 AM
ohh, a wrenching poem beautifully crafted, talin!... winning wishes..huggs
Kalishian Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 8:18 AM
We meet again ,, its good to be back Thankx ,,, my pleasure
Kalishian Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 5:33 AM
Not always, well i guess it differs from a person to other but thats my fate so far... my pleasure
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 6:30 PM
Hello Talin Kalishian, it is so nice to meet you. Yes life is lonely and stressful as well. Have a nice evening my friend.
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