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Loneliness - Pleiades

Long cold winters alone, Lacking someone to share, Love pets, limit grief known, Live for others to care, Looking for a soulmate, Left out, seems too unfair, Limping life’s path so late.

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Mark Martin

Date: 4/27/2017 2:45:00 PM

Sad, lonely poetry, well written. Congratulations on your win Cecelia! :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2017 7:34:00 PM

Nicely written , Cecelia, congratulations on your win. ~*

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/19/2017 9:48:00 AM

Profound Sadness expressed lyrically:) congratulations, Cecelia:)

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/18/2017 10:40:00 PM

Cecelia, this was so sad. Great depiction of loneliness! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Roy Pett

Date: 4/18/2017 4:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Cecelia, great Pleiades. :))

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/18/2017 7:18:00 AM

Great job depicting sadness in so few lines, congrats on your win, Cecelia.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2017 1:46:00 AM

- Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Cecelia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White

Date: 4/17/2017 2:04:00 AM

I absolutely love your Pleiades, they flow very naturally and to me this is VERY good. I wish you good luck in the contest :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/16/2017 3:32:00 PM

Every line portrays intense loneliness:-( Very well penned Cecilia good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Niall Fulham

Date: 4/15/2017 5:10:00 PM

Hi Cecelia, came across as very sad very well done I can feel the pain in the words:) I have a poem called ( love ) I think the worst type of loneliness is in a bad relationship :) Happy Easter and hugs from Ireland

Chris Green

Date: 4/14/2017 4:01:00 PM

This is so sad Cecelia but very nicely written because the emotions are easily felt in your words. If this is for a contest, I wish you well my friend.

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer
Date: 4/14/2017 5:07:00 PM

Thank you Chris. Yes, it is for a contest, I find the contests are good discipline, challenging me to use forms I would not use otherwise. Only a strong emotion would do for this form!