Lone Yellow Flower

lone yellow flower 
waves in the open fields
bowing according to the tune 
among the sea of green; 
lone yellow flower has no one to blame
and it seeks none to praise 
for it knows all life comes in 
when the conditions are right; 
lone yellow flower knows 
death comes in like the wind; 
lone yellow flower 
is never alone
for it is a part of the expression
of the earth and time and the universe; 
lone yellow flower sees what is before and around
lone yellow flower observes what is within and about
and so lone yellow flower lives with no delusions
no beliefs of heaven and hell
fears none and does not live or die
to please or amuse or appease; 
and lone yellow flower
blossoms and shines
and shrivels and ceases
in harmony
with what actually is; 
lone yellow flower 
waves in the open fields
bowing according to the tune 
among the sea of green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 9:01 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Fred. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 31, 2010 at 2:38 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
Fisher Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 12:10 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Two thumbs up my friend. Wish you more success. Ernilando
Brown Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Fred. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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January 31, 2010 at 7:51 AM
Congratulations Fred, on placing 2nd in The Rambling Poet’s “Wild Flowers” Mini-Poetry contest with these creative words. Your poem is enjoyable to read. Smiles, Dane Ann
Beam Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 10:13 PM
good view and a great write yet one awaits
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January 29, 2010 at 8:35 PM
Good use of imagery and an interesting perspective. Congratulations on your second place finish in Constance's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 7:38 PM
Consider them. . . (like the lilies of the fields) This is just awesome and congratulations for your win in that very short contest!! Luv, Andrea
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January 29, 2010 at 4:04 PM
Congratulations on your second place. I really love the vibration the poem create.
Adelana Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 4:04 PM
Many wishes with your other poem
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 2:24 PM
Congratulations on your second place win Fred. Your poem vibrates in beauty as does your philosophy. Aloha, Connie
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January 29, 2010 at 12:24 PM
congratulations Fred! Robert
Johnson Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 11:41 AM
Very nice your poem on the flower with no name. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 10:41 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Fred. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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January 29, 2010 at 9:49 AM
A well deserved win for you, Fred! Great poem! Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 8:58 AM
Congratulations on your second place win, in my contest, Wildflowers, with this beautiful poem.
Culverhouse Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 7:04 AM
beautiful picture you paint, I can see it so well!!
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 6:41 AM
Sounds like a lonely life out there in that field all by itself. Welcome to soup. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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January 29, 2010 at 4:09 AM
well i can picture the lone yellow flower among the sea of green. A great poem it is enjoyed~~
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January 29, 2010 at 1:22 AM
I like the "lone yellow flower's perspective on the world around her and her place in the universe. Nice work, Danny. Love, Carolyn
Bagnall Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 12:46 AM
You have captured some interesting emoyions here I do not Know wether to be sad for the lonely flower or pleased for it's care Free nature - interesting and nicely put together
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