Lone Star of Christmas-Hiku

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while all stars were wishing
and some were wished upon ~
one star obeys

humble and bright
lit especially by
the sheep herder of lights

11/23/2021
Syllables - 6/6/4 4/6/6

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/30/2021 9:27:00 PM

"one star" - this is all it takes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/26/2021 7:46:00 PM

Just beautiful, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2021 5:34:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea!

Silpika Kalita

Date: 11/26/2021 6:45:00 PM

So blissful to bless the celestial auspicious eve... Hugs!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2021 5:27:00 AM

Thank you, sweet poet!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/24/2021 4:06:00 PM

Hello Kim, that one star led the shepards to the cradle. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/25/2021 10:57:00 AM

Hello Kim, I am gld they followed the star. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2021 7:15:00 AM

Yes, it did! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 11/24/2021 7:54:00 AM

Here they come, The celebration is on it's way. It want be long til we're celebrating Christmas Day. Thanks for sharing the beginnning of the graetest story ever told with us Kim. I'm excited! The prophescy was true. To us was born a Savior, Christ the King of Kings. Your friend, Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2021 7:14:00 AM

I love, Bill, that you are excited! Let us all ride the joy of the moment that the King of kings was born!