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Lone Bird

I stay awake; I am like a solitary bird on a roof Psalm 102:7 CSB lone bird, wings claustrophobic, abalone-gray sans dandelion’s glory surrounded by seeds

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/2/2024 5:12:00 PM

I feel like that bird. Some poets are not responding. Persecution mania?

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2024 7:44:00 PM

Be patient sweet poet and I endure the same at times. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/31/2024 10:06:00 PM

That last line is so interesting and really suits the title of this

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2024 6:13:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea!

Paige Hind

Date: 1/31/2024 2:05:00 PM

This is so simple, but powerful. Going in my fav!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2024 5:47:00 PM

I really appreciate that, Paige!

Silent One

Date: 1/31/2024 12:26:00 PM

Nicely done.. I have a few poems about a solitary bird...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2024 5:48:00 PM

Very cool! A poet’s eyes always catching the nuances of nature and the inner world.

brenda Joyce

Date: 1/31/2024 10:41:00 AM

Enjoyed! Thanks for sharing!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2024 11:20:00 AM

Thank you for reading :)

I Am Anaya

Date: 1/31/2024 9:21:00 AM

psalms help us make good poetry, Kim as you well know. It teaches us so much, much-needed! I love what Jeanette said about the seeds:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2024 11:21:00 AM

Thank you, Anaya! Blessings!

Karen Jones

Date: 1/31/2024 1:17:00 AM

I like this it is eloquent

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2024 4:11:00 AM

Thank you, Karen!

Jeanette Swan

Date: 1/30/2024 6:36:00 PM

I love this verse too, it is a poignant sad picture of the flock-less bird. I like how you out seeds in the poem, with all the future promise they hold.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2024 7:32:00 PM

Thank you, Jeanette! I’m glad you noticed that.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/30/2024 6:30:00 PM

? Sometimes I don't understand a poem. claustrophobic, I do suffer from. Enjoyed reading.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2024 7:32:00 PM

I don’t understand them all either. This one came from the bird I saw today. He was all alone on a fence with his wings tight to his sides. I was then doing my bible study and came across this verse! Hugs