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The big smoke had always been around Its fingers the veins running through our wrists Bluer and firmer as we pranced across the stage like Gods Its voice this summer was sweeter than honey And we could resist no longer A train Four hours and we had escaped this place's grey-green discolouration The sun held London as though it were his child His heart warmed our cheeks and twinkled in the river But stars shone in the sequins Of the queens at the palace Theatre Perched, ready to laugh or cry or dance Nestled like chicks in the velvet seats We were home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/7/2011 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "What Turns You On"contest Gracie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2011 5:36:00 PM
Congrats Gracie on a superb first place win luv..
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Date: 11/6/2011 2:22:00 PM
SO cool to be turned On by coming home! Very NICE loved the imagery in the ending. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 11/6/2011 12:48:00 PM
WoW! Very nice description here. Beautifully worded and well strung together. Excellent piece. God Bles, JB
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Date: 11/6/2011 11:01:00 AM
Ahhh...this is so wonderful !!! I felt myself, embarking from the train with you, with joy in my heart! Wow...congratulations are well deserved!!
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Date: 8/25/2011 3:27:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very interesting poetry today Gracie. Love, Carol
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