Lolita's Sin

Lolita's Sin

  Lolita's sin is mine alone.
  She never knew her power.
  Bubble gum puffy breasts
  I desired her perfect flower.

  Her mother died to save her
  but she saved me instead.
  We went to my bed for comfort,
  that night she finally bled.

  Lolita floats wild on the wind
  her cheap perfume my seduction.
  She died birthing our sin and
  causing my Eden's destruction.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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March 13, 2024 at 6:58 PM
Dear William, Your poem stirred deep emotions within me. The raw portrayal of desire, guilt, and tragedy was amazing. The juxtaposition of innocence and corruption, intertwined with the complexities of human nature, left me haunted. Your words created a stark picture of love twisted by societal taboos. It’s a testament to your skill that you captured such dark beauty in verse. This seems to be. piece of your soul with the world.- Blessings, Daniel
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