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Lolita's Sin

Lolita's Sin Lolita's sin is mine alone. She never knew her power. Bubble gum puffy breasts I desired her perfect flower. Her mother died to save her but she saved me instead. We went to my bed for comfort, that night she finally bled. Lolita floats wild on the wind her cheap perfume my seduction. She died birthing our sin and causing my Eden's destruction.

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Date: 3/13/2024 6:58:00 PM
Dear William, Your poem stirred deep emotions within me. The raw portrayal of desire, guilt, and tragedy was amazing. The juxtaposition of innocence and corruption, intertwined with the complexities of human nature, left me haunted. Your words created a stark picture of love twisted by societal taboos. It’s a testament to your skill that you captured such dark beauty in verse. This seems to be. piece of your soul with the world.- Blessings, Daniel
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