Locked Out of My House

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One Sunday, I came back alone, Home early from the church, Not having the key to get in, I was left in the lurch; Locked out in the scorching hot sun, Looking for shade to stand, Counting the vehicles go by, I passed the time in hand; Scolding myself for thoughtlessness, I sat on "Jupiter", Hoping my parents would come soon, I waited undeterred; Standing almost for one hour there, Stuck outside my home zone, In order to avoid the stares, I tinkered with my phone; That day, I learnt to be careful, To check my handbag twice, Be cool in all circumstances, Be patient and precise. 09/18/17
*Jupiter - a two-wheeler brand Form: Poulter's Measure

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Date: 3/9/2025 4:40:00 AM
My favorite part is the avoidance of looks so not to face the embarrassment with others. Well done.
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Date: 3/17/2018 12:22:00 PM
Lol. I can relate but always seemed to realize my keys were in the ignition AS the door was slamming shut!
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Date: 9/28/2017 1:51:00 PM
I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..Glad that you learned something by the mistake of not having your key at least in the poem..Sara
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Date: 9/28/2017 7:21:00 AM
Nicely done Jo.
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Date: 9/27/2017 8:11:00 PM
Now I have to look up this form. You have done an excellent job with it. We've all been there at least once or twice. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/27/2017 5:11:00 PM
Jo, a wonderful write, and congratulations!
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Date: 9/27/2017 4:38:00 PM
I love the picture and the poem, the imagery was so vivid i can imagine it happening for real Jo:-)Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/23/2017 7:00:00 PM
Real fine write Jo, love the great rhyme and flow, have blessed weekend, Gordon
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:59:00 PM
An awesome write Jo. I've been in that situation myself once or twice... lol! Your poem made me smile. Enjoyed! :)
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Date: 9/23/2017 12:52:00 PM
this is a fun one. Thanks for your visit.
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Date: 9/22/2017 5:59:00 PM
You addressed the topic very well, Jo. Knowing me, I'd have gone for a walk or something!! I can't stand being bored standing around. That is an interesting form, the poulter's measure, and it looks like you did a great job of it.
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Date: 9/22/2017 8:24:00 AM
Forgetting the keys 'leaves us in the lurch'...Nicely penned Jo
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Date: 9/18/2017 5:57:00 PM
ohh, i can so relate!...such an impressive work from your spilled pen, jo..huggs
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Date: 9/18/2017 12:21:00 PM
Haha...I've crawled through a second story window once... Luckily it was in the back of the house...a favorite
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Date: 9/18/2017 7:52:00 AM
Well written Jo. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/18/2017 7:31:00 AM
This is very funny! Of course it's not funny when you are in that situation, but afterwards when you are inside it can be hilarious! I surely loved reading this illustrious poem this morning! You have written a magnificent write Jo! What a remarkable piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/18/2017 7:15:00 AM
Great write for the contest Jo..
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Date: 9/18/2017 7:06:00 AM
Oh Jo, I love the picture and caption! That would be a guy's thought. Nicely done. I'm writing about the same kind of situation that happened to me, but it's a sad account. Well wishes for the contest.
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