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M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/9/2019 2:25:00 PM

Don't we all...A superb one!

Sand Blown

Date: 2/8/2019 9:53:00 AM

choking?

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/8/2019 11:17:00 AM

...squeaking

Literary Waves

Date: 2/8/2019 9:01:00 AM

stunning!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/8/2019 9:21:00 AM

Thank you! Cool moniker :) xomo!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/7/2019 9:48:00 PM

Ha, ha! Just love it. You creative raconteur, you! :) gw

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/8/2019 7:40:00 AM

Tee hee ;) thank you comrade ~<3 xomo!

Silent One

Date: 2/7/2019 12:02:00 PM

So much in 10 letters... when there is no space, there is no light.... Get it?

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/7/2019 1:02:00 PM

Uhuh, no cracks ;) xomo!

Jeff Connelly

Date: 2/7/2019 9:58:00 AM

Loved this. The poem playing off of the title. The sheer minimalism or confined space, and the lines placement on the page. Very nice Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/7/2019 1:19:00 PM

Thank you so much Jeff! My poet/painter/sculptor muse is elated with your keen review(s). It is lovely to meet you. Did I welcome you to the soup? Welcome! :) xomo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/7/2019 5:47:00 AM

If there was ever a perfect poem, this is it.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/7/2019 7:35:00 AM

If there was ever a poet I want to hug, it is you! ;) Thank you Caren! xomo

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 2/6/2019 4:24:00 PM

Hahahaha! Good one! ;D I agree with Rico's comment, you should make this a bumper sticker!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/6/2019 8:19:00 PM

It's awfully tempting... It would be a great logo for a courier bag company... ;)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/6/2019 4:01:00 PM

Clever girl! Got a quick laugh out of that one! Make it a bumper sticker! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/6/2019 4:13:00 PM

OMG, as a cyclist, YES! I love it. Thank you! xomo

Bette Bavington

Date: 2/6/2019 1:28:00 PM

Interesting concept. Uniquely done.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/6/2019 2:21:00 PM

Thank you Bette. A lil experimental ;) xomo

Mike Hauser

Date: 2/6/2019 12:22:00 PM

:0)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/6/2019 2:21:00 PM

;o*

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/6/2019 10:15:00 AM

ha! well done, maureen!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/6/2019 10:21:00 AM

Thank you Ilene! :) xomo!