Loch Ness

Like a tiny drop of rain glinting
then cracking the surface 
where still waters once lie
creates a ripple effect
spreading outward to the farthest reaching shore

Is how so deeply wanting the sight to be more real
makes stories bubble up 
as if filling an empty glass with water
and silt, unclear

Like a drizzle turning into a downpour
forces a squinting gaze from across the inland lake

Like a mirror reflecting back basal desires
so we think

Toes digging into the sand for a better reach
leaning, waiting for lightening to strike
proving that the moonlight doesn't lie

That there is a monster deep inside
behind the glass
below the surface
looking through the silt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/31/2018 3:03:00 PM
Lovely write Sarah, congrats :)
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Date: 2/27/2018 4:26:00 AM
thanks so much!
Date: 1/31/2018 2:44:00 PM
Beautiful read, Sarah. Congrats on your winning poem.
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Date: 2/27/2018 4:26:00 AM
Thanks very much Line. :D
Date: 1/31/2018 12:45:00 PM
Awesome write, Sarah, congratulation on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/8/2018 1:25:00 PM
Interestingly if lightning strikes the san you may discover glass with those toes that are digging into the sand. We here in Kelowna BC have Ogo Pogo which is Nessy's cousin.
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Date: 12/31/2017 11:37:00 AM
This is great!
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