Lobo and Luna Ticks

The moon shines down on a dune
Where a wolf has started to croon
For a female fights
To turn out the lights
Which are known to wrinkle a prune!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 6:06 PM
Great line "wrinkle a prune" enjoyed this!
Leffanta Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico
Man Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 9:46 PM
Love the imagery in this incredible limerick, Rico!
Leffanta Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico
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