Jan Allison Poet Alliteration

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Lmn

literary loss
limericks, lyrics lacking -
lockdown laziness!

missing many months
making me melancholy
my mischievous muse!

negotiation  -
needs nutty nougat nightly ...
new notions noted!

Let the Pens Flow - Alliteration Poetry Contest

Jenish Somadas

07/22/20

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Jenish Somadas August 9, 2020 at 6:03 AM Your muse is flying in bright colors.. Great alliterations..Congrats on your wonderful win Jan.. Jan Allison January 31, 2021 at 11:10 AM thanks Jenish:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2020 at 1:20 PM I still think YOU nailed this one, Jan. Finally going through the list and seeing all the winners, and yours really shines. Congrats, dear friend. Jan Allison January 31, 2021 at 11:10 AM thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Aditi Mishra August 8, 2020 at 5:53 AM So witty with the flow of a brilliant muse on the theme of a mischievous one! Congratulations on your win Jan! Much love :) Jan Allison January 31, 2021 at 11:10 AM thanks Aditi:-) hugs Jan xx

John Watt August 7, 2020 at 11:16 AM Amazing assonant alliterations, Mrs Allison, and all on the theme of losing one's muse. You did this brilliantly, a top winner in my book. I loved your witty ending with how to solve the muse problem... I shall have to try that (oh wait, I already have!) Congrats and hugs ~ John Jan Allison January 31, 2021 at 11:11 AM thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx

Howard Kerr July 27, 2020 at 1:31 AM Hi Jan, Immaculate work deserving of every award. Best of luck with this Howard Jan Allison January 31, 2021 at 11:11 AM thanks Howard:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2020 at 3:51 PM wow, you did amazing here. I am having SO many problems doing this one. I think you and someone else have done it like haiku style and that way makes it easier! I wanted to do k/l/m, but just not getting anywhere!! Jan Allison July 26, 2020 at 1:37 PM it really is a challenge am sure you will nail it:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Koplin July 24, 2020 at 12:33 PM Nice alliteration Jan! That muse of yours sounds pretty high maintenance. Jan Allison July 26, 2020 at 1:20 PM She is misbehaving I am hoping more cups of tea and a scone with jam and clotted cream will tempt her to write a funny poem:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire July 23, 2020 at 12:48 PM Your talented pen has been inspired! Love the alliteration in this poem. Wishing you success in Jenish's contest. Hugs, Carolyn Jan Allison July 26, 2020 at 1:19 PM thanks Carolyn:-) hugs jan xx

Michelle Faulkner July 22, 2020 at 8:01 PM Oh I was thinking of doing 'lmn' - this is lovely, magnificent, and notable ;) best of luck in the contest! Jan Allison July 24, 2020 at 4:14 PM I am sure you will come up with a super string of poems Michelle, i actually started on 'i' but hit a brick wall so went with a new theme:-) hugs Jan xx

Sam Kauffman July 22, 2020 at 5:31 PM Oh, Jan, your muse is a rascal bribed by "nutty nougats!" This is truly delightful! Good luck in the contest! Hugs! Jan Allison July 24, 2020 at 4:12 PM thanks Sam - she has been missing but not even chocolate would tempt her back lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May July 22, 2020 at 5:05 PM Well done Jan, GL in the contest..Soupmail Jan Allison July 24, 2020 at 4:06 PM thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose July 22, 2020 at 2:17 PM Ah, I don't think your muse will ever abandon you, you are a challenge to it, and it will keep you busy , long after this world has come and gone, Love and hugs xo Jan Allison July 24, 2020 at 4:05 PM thanks Pixie i have never lost my muse before and had no desire to write but i think she has crawled out of hiding:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues July 22, 2020 at 1:53 PM needs nutty nougat nightly...I would say so! Keep writing, dear friend and thanks a lot for making me hungry ;) Jan Allison July 22, 2020 at 2:02 PM lol thanks Kim ... if only it was true lol then again I would have to buy shares in a sweet company:-) hugs Janxx

Tom Cunningham July 22, 2020 at 12:50 PM Glad she found her way home Jan, didn't find this one easy to do. Good luck Tom Jan Allison July 22, 2020 at 12:56 PM I have another poem I started using I but this one flowed much better:-) so glad soup is back up and running:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan July 22, 2020 at 12:33 PM If she's still missing, I don't think you need her. Good write, Jan. Jan Allison July 22, 2020 at 12:35 PM aww thanks Jenna i think she is finally returning to full pomp now:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 22, 2020 at 12:14 PM Love the "nutty nougat nightly"! Too much fun. xomo Jan Allison July 22, 2020 at 12:23 PM thanks Mo:-) My muse upped and left but the nutty nougat is pure fiction:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer July 22, 2020 at 12:14 PM this is adorable, jan! best of luck in the contest... Jan Allison July 22, 2020 at 12:23 PM Thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx