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literary loss limericks, lyrics lacking - lockdown laziness! missing many months making me melancholy my mischievous muse! negotiation - needs nutty nougat nightly ... new notions noted! Let the Pens Flow - Alliteration Poetry Contest Jenish Somadas 07/22/20

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Date: 8/9/2020 6:03:00 AM
Your muse is flying in bright colors.. Great alliterations..Congrats on your wonderful win Jan..
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/31/2021 11:10:00 AM
thanks Jenish:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/8/2020 1:20:00 PM
I still think YOU nailed this one, Jan. Finally going through the list and seeing all the winners, and yours really shines. Congrats, dear friend.
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Date: 1/31/2021 11:10:00 AM
thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/8/2020 5:53:00 AM
So witty with the flow of a brilliant muse on the theme of a mischievous one! Congratulations on your win Jan! Much love :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/31/2021 11:10:00 AM
thanks Aditi:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/7/2020 11:16:00 AM
Amazing assonant alliterations, Mrs Allison, and all on the theme of losing one's muse. You did this brilliantly, a top winner in my book. I loved your witty ending with how to solve the muse problem... I shall have to try that (oh wait, I already have!) Congrats and hugs ~ John
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/31/2021 11:11:00 AM
thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/27/2020 1:31:00 AM
Hi Jan, Immaculate work deserving of every award. Best of luck with this Howard
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Date: 1/31/2021 11:11:00 AM
thanks Howard:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/25/2020 9:28:00 AM
Wow! What an amazing poem! Love every word. Good luck in the contest. Chantelle hugs
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Date: 7/26/2020 1:38:00 PM
thanks Chantelle:-) hope you are keeping as well as possible my friend:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/24/2020 3:51:00 PM
wow, you did amazing here. I am having SO many problems doing this one. I think you and someone else have done it like haiku style and that way makes it easier! I wanted to do k/l/m, but just not getting anywhere!!
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Date: 7/26/2020 1:37:00 PM
it really is a challenge am sure you will nail it:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/24/2020 12:33:00 PM
Nice alliteration Jan! That muse of yours sounds pretty high maintenance.
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Date: 7/26/2020 1:20:00 PM
She is misbehaving I am hoping more cups of tea and a scone with jam and clotted cream will tempt her to write a funny poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/23/2020 12:48:00 PM
Your talented pen has been inspired! Love the alliteration in this poem. Wishing you success in Jenish's contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 7/26/2020 1:19:00 PM
thanks Carolyn:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/22/2020 8:01:00 PM
Oh I was thinking of doing 'lmn' - this is lovely, magnificent, and notable ;) best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 7/24/2020 4:14:00 PM
I am sure you will come up with a super string of poems Michelle, i actually started on 'i' but hit a brick wall so went with a new theme:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/22/2020 5:31:00 PM
Oh, Jan, your muse is a rascal bribed by "nutty nougats!" This is truly delightful! Good luck in the contest! Hugs!
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Date: 7/24/2020 4:12:00 PM
thanks Sam - she has been missing but not even chocolate would tempt her back lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/22/2020 5:05:00 PM
Well done Jan, GL in the contest..Soupmail
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Date: 7/24/2020 4:06:00 PM
thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/22/2020 2:17:00 PM
Ah, I don't think your muse will ever abandon you, you are a challenge to it, and it will keep you busy , long after this world has come and gone, Love and hugs xo
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Date: 7/24/2020 4:05:00 PM
thanks Pixie i have never lost my muse before and had no desire to write but i think she has crawled out of hiding:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/22/2020 1:53:00 PM
needs nutty nougat nightly...I would say so! Keep writing, dear friend and thanks a lot for making me hungry ;)
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Date: 7/22/2020 2:02:00 PM
lol thanks Kim ... if only it was true lol then again I would have to buy shares in a sweet company:-) hugs Janxx
Date: 7/22/2020 12:50:00 PM
Glad she found her way home Jan, didn't find this one easy to do. Good luck Tom
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/22/2020 12:56:00 PM
I have another poem I started using I but this one flowed much better:-) so glad soup is back up and running:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/22/2020 12:33:00 PM
If she's still missing, I don't think you need her. Good write, Jan.
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Date: 7/22/2020 12:35:00 PM
aww thanks Jenna i think she is finally returning to full pomp now:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/22/2020 12:14:00 PM
this is adorable, jan! best of luck in the contest...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/22/2020 12:23:00 PM
Thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/22/2020 12:14:00 PM
Love the "nutty nougat nightly"! Too much fun. xomo
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/22/2020 12:23:00 PM
thanks Mo:-) My muse upped and left but the nutty nougat is pure fiction:-) hugs jan xx