Llorn

Beguiled by the eyes of a thief
Whose hands have stolen the moist of my skin
With just a breath my very soul he unruffled
With just a gaze he made these words improper; jumbled.
Not like any other, he's chaste
Not like any other, Not like...

Ever he would wipe these tears away
Ever he'd kneel to his knees to plead
His volition's bullet in my chest
Digging trebling holes that never convalesce.
Not like any other he mastered
This art of hate that tortures as it perforates.
  
Shut the door, I beg
So I'll ever see your face
It attracts more of distaste,
venomous like a snake.
Shut the door and don't
remind me of your world
-Your burning dreams off the wall!
Dull me like a flower on the wall.
Cause I could die every day
My veins would not display
Free fall, I already fall
I beg, please shut the door.

Cause how to let you go?
...Really. I don't know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 12:29 PM
once again, wonderful first poem. LINDA
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January 20, 2016 at 9:01 AM
what she thought about what I sought is why she fought but also how she got caught in a moment that taught her that Love can only be bought with only a pure heart, otherwise, you will be left distraught....very inspiring luci....;)
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January 19, 2016 at 4:35 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup with your great first poem, Luci :) - Here you will find heartily warmth, and meet many great poets - A meeting place for inspiration, growth and pleasure for your words and thoughts - I wish you every success - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lynd Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Thanks for your warm welcome Anne Lise. Great to hear from you :)
A   Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 8:41 PM
Hi Lucy, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Lynd Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:05 AM
Thank you Linda. I'll surely enjoy writing with you guys. Nice meeting you :)
A  Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 1:37 PM
Luci, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT *
Lynd Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Thank you Skat, for your warm welcome. Great to hear from you. I love this site and I feel comfortable with people sharing their thoughts right here. Hope to stay for long to write some more. You're awesome :)
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