Kim Merryman Poet Limerick

Lizzie and Hal

LIZZIE was an incompetent witch,
Who was helping friend HAL from a ditch.
Her magic she tried,
Poor HAL was french-fried,
Left wearing not one single stitch.

5/21/15
For Catie Lindsey's L & H Limerick contest

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Kelli White August 24, 2015 at 6:58 PM ??hahaha

Lycia Harding June 15, 2015 at 2:39 PM Wait...hold on - Do you mean to tell me that all you Poetry Princesses, Verse Vixens and Meter Maidens (;P) here at PS actually DO accept the limerick as a legitimate memeber of the poetical realm? Oh, that makes me so happy, I will read them all!

Arthur Vaso May 25, 2015 at 2:53 PM LOL this is great, and so very creative!!! Kim Merryman May 28, 2015 at 4:44 PM Thank you, Arthur! Glad you liked it!

Emile Pinet May 22, 2015 at 8:10 AM Your humor and wit wrap themselves around your words and we are left with a smile. Emile. Kim Merryman May 24, 2015 at 12:20 PM What a sweet thing to say! Thank you, Emile!

Andrea Dietrich May 21, 2015 at 11:59 PM hey, this is a GOOD one, Kim. Nice seeing you limericking!! Kim Merryman May 24, 2015 at 12:18 PM Thank you, Andrea! Glad you liked it.

Constance La France May 21, 2015 at 9:27 PM Kim, this is a good one, funny 7,and thanks for visiting my poem, words. .. Kim Merryman May 24, 2015 at 12:17 PM Thank you, BW! And you are most welcome.

Eve Roper May 21, 2015 at 9:16 PM So funny, kim, good piece for the contest. a 7 hugs eve Kim Merryman May 24, 2015 at 12:16 PM Thank you, Eve! Glad you liked it.

Alexis Y. May 21, 2015 at 8:23 PM This is a funny one! Nice job. Good luck in the contest. -Alexis Kim Merryman May 24, 2015 at 12:15 PM Thank you, Alexis! Glad you liked it.

Paul Callus May 21, 2015 at 12:35 PM Very witty, Kim! We can have a laugh at Hal's expense. // paul Kim Merryman May 24, 2015 at 12:14 PM Thank you, Paul!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2015 at 11:55 AM - Fun to read, Kim :))) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Merryman May 24, 2015 at 12:12 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Jan Allison May 21, 2015 at 11:07 AM ha ha ha love it - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Kim Merryman May 24, 2015 at 12:09 PM Thanks, Jan!