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Lizzie and Hal

LIZZIE was an incompetent witch, Who was helping friend HAL from a ditch. Her magic she tried, Poor HAL was french-fried, Left wearing not one single stitch. 5/21/15 For Catie Lindsey's L & H Limerick contest

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Date: 8/24/2015 6:58:00 PM
??hahaha
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Date: 6/15/2015 2:39:00 PM
Wait...hold on - Do you mean to tell me that all you Poetry Princesses, Verse Vixens and Meter Maidens (;P) here at PS actually DO accept the limerick as a legitimate memeber of the poetical realm? Oh, that makes me so happy, I will read them all!
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Date: 5/25/2015 2:53:00 PM
LOL this is great, and so very creative!!!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/28/2015 4:44:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur! Glad you liked it!
Date: 5/22/2015 8:10:00 AM
Your humor and wit wrap themselves around your words and we are left with a smile. Emile.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/24/2015 12:20:00 PM
What a sweet thing to say! Thank you, Emile!
Date: 5/21/2015 11:59:00 PM
hey, this is a GOOD one, Kim. Nice seeing you limericking!!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/24/2015 12:18:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Glad you liked it.
Date: 5/21/2015 9:27:00 PM
Kim, this is a good one, funny 7,and thanks for visiting my poem, words. ..
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/24/2015 12:17:00 PM
Thank you, BW! And you are most welcome.
Date: 5/21/2015 9:16:00 PM
So funny, kim, good piece for the contest. a 7 hugs eve
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/24/2015 12:16:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! Glad you liked it.
Date: 5/21/2015 8:23:00 PM
This is a funny one! Nice job. Good luck in the contest. -Alexis
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/24/2015 12:15:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis! Glad you liked it.
Date: 5/21/2015 12:35:00 PM
Very witty, Kim! We can have a laugh at Hal's expense. // paul
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/24/2015 12:14:00 PM
Thank you, Paul!
Date: 5/21/2015 11:55:00 AM
- Fun to read, Kim :))) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/24/2015 12:12:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 5/21/2015 11:07:00 AM
ha ha ha love it - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 5/24/2015 12:09:00 PM
Thanks, Jan!