Living Water

Zest of Yours makes existence real Along rippling survival zeal Enabling thriving of good seed… You’re the living water* indeed. Creator of each oxygen Functional well with hydrogen For thirst-quenching need… You’re the living water indeed. Filled by precious crystal faith-gain Along gracious service terrain Flowing well for give and share need… You’re the living water indeed. Lord God, You grant fulfillment plight For optimized blessing delight Worthy of thankful creed and deed You’re the living water indeed.
*John 4:10, 14 Jesus answered and said unto her, If thou knewest the gift of God, and who it is that saith to thee, Give me to drink; thou wouldest have asked of him, and he would have given thee living water… But whosoever drinketh of the water that I shall give him shall never thirst; but the water that I shall give him shall be in him a well of water springing up into everlasting life. September 2, 2022 6th place, "A KYRIELLE ABOUT WATER" Poetry Writing Premiere Contest Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues; judged on 9/24/2022.
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Kauffman Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 10:01 AM
I love the story of the woman at the well who was certain she knew what this stranger at the well was all about and she was going to educate him! Indeed God refreshes us with surprises and living water so that we will never thirst again. So well spoken. Congratulations on your win. Blessings in fountains of living water.
Alex Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 10:09 PM
"You’re the living water* indeed" - Beautifully sai, as always. Congratulations!
Rose  Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 3:39 PM
He is most definitely our living water dear Beata. We will be thirsting for Him until the day He takes us back home. Congrats on your win, this is wonderfully written, love and prayers xo
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 5:18 PM
Beata, I know I congratulated you but for some reason it is missing. Congratulations on your placement!
Fowler Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 7:44 AM
Back with big congratulations on your win Beata! Linda
Fowler Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 8:05 AM
Another beautiful write Beata! Linda
George Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 11:18 PM
Yes, our Lord is the living water. Those who drink from Him shall not thirst ! So beautiful and uplifting ! Your faith shines.... ! All the Best Beata !
Buehler Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 10:52 AM
Beautiful and inspiring, this outstanding kyrielle makes a fine contest contender, Beata. Best wishes for a win, Evelyn :)
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