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Living Vivid

The orange flowers attract bumble bees Yellow and black bees stung my red knees Dance round flailing and wailing crimson legs Devilish dimples arose; scratch pegs Several amber ants stung white toes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/27/2013 7:28:00 PM
Oh, dear, this is a vivid way to live, enjoyed this poem Doris.
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Date: 10/17/2012 12:24:00 PM
Well this is just a buzz of a write Doris, I`ll bet the air was filled with all sorts of noises at this taste of summers attractions.." LOL} Hope you are well Joe.)
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Date: 10/12/2012 7:02:00 AM
Love it! I'm a bizarre individual who doesn't feel it when bees or wasps sting, at least not at first. After ending up with a calcium lump from one I wonder whether I'd be better off with the initial pain.
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Date: 10/4/2012 11:36:00 AM
Very expressive work..I hope not but just some funny thoughts..Once long ago I was stung by a hornet walking to the mail box..Not any fun..Mom
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Date: 10/4/2012 10:20:00 AM
ha ha ha... i love this fascinating Limerick of yours my dear friend, Doris. I remember when I was a child. I was fond of going to the garden to pick some flowers or catch dragonflies and I got stung by a bumble bee, lol. I've enjoyed reading your work tonight. Thank you so much for sharing it. More power and graces always!!! love and hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/4/2012 8:54:00 AM
Creative write friend Doris.thanks for sharing. Have a nice day..hugs!!
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Date: 10/1/2012 3:52:00 PM
Cute title for this one. I think it would make one quite livid indeed!! Your mom talked about those ants in one of her poems too!!
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Date: 9/29/2012 6:57:00 PM
Living in the country, I'm always on the lookout for those nasty little creatures! My son once was stung by a bee on the lip and his face became unrecognizable! Great read... hugs, Jack
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Date: 9/28/2012 2:14:00 PM
Those pesky bugs and you never know when they want to bite. A cute poem Doris. love phyl
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Date: 9/27/2012 7:29:00 AM
nicely done.thanx for reading my stuff.
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Date: 9/26/2012 9:45:00 PM
Did you hear my chuckle? Reading this one pulled one from me. Enjoyed this Limerick. thanks for reading me. One love Joy Wells
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Date: 9/26/2012 3:46:00 PM
you sure were having a bad time there Doris, love your poetry version of it all though.....
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Date: 9/26/2012 1:47:00 PM
lol, had a chuckle here, Doris. Hope you are much better now
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Date: 9/26/2012 6:49:00 AM
Doris; this is so cute. I have been stung by bees before and that was not funny. Nice work here. Thanks for reading- ( The Moon Cried ) Many blessings. Lucilla
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Date: 9/25/2012 8:00:00 PM
Dern bugs! Who needs 'em!? Fun rhyme, Doris! Very fun-knee! :)
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Date: 9/25/2012 3:17:00 PM
impishly delightful, doris... some really wonderful, colorful wordcraft here... enjoyed!..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/25/2012 11:53:00 AM
Ha ha, not laughing at you poem my friend, just at the poor dilemma of being stung multiple times by different animals, bugs! This is an awesome limerick! Fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/25/2012 11:33:00 AM
Good.... flowers and bumble bees.....A sting that really hurts. - hugs Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2012 10:11:00 AM
Funny and painful at the same time. I hate those fire ants. Should do well in the contest.
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