Living Subconscious Patterns

I feel yellow and orange and swirls begin
Prancing and dancing, smiling with mirth
What about pops of white? My muse asks.
I shush her, because I am in a swirly mode.

Hot pink drops into my dendrite field.
She is all about herself, living her best life.
I have no choice, so I add her to my soul.
Friday has never felt so dazzling!

Silver? Gold? Purple? The majestic colors.
Would solid be appropriate? Layers upon layers of bliss.
My muse dares not speak, wondering where I am going.
I am all about checks now. They are always red and black.

Unsure why, but suspect it is due to my grandmother’s afghan.
My mother completed it a week before grandma died.
It was a crocheted beauty, which stimulates red and black.
I begin to paint in this memory, not recognizing the significance.

Glittery, happy, joyful dashes and drops 
Complete my exuberance today. 
I feel myself easily.
Living subconscious patterns.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 1/17/2021 2:38:00 PM
I'm too thick to get 'subconscious,' but I sure like the 'connect the colors' motif! Frolif, fun and freedom, gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/17/2021 6:47:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I do not think you are in any way thick.
Date: 1/15/2021 9:04:00 PM
Colors, colors, all different but each complimenting the other. Each different color makes it's neighbors stand out. The garden with it's many different colors and shapes. You can get lost in the colors. Great job here. Draws you right in. God Bless, JB
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/16/2021 4:47:00 PM
I tell you, colors and patterns mean the world to me. I am surrounded by them on every wall, chosen by me, the artist.
Date: 1/15/2021 6:49:00 PM
...it does not matter the what....it is only the being of patterns that defines the mathematical mind.......all are one......... stan sand
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Date: 1/16/2021 4:47:00 PM
Mathematical minds! What? I am such an artist, and math terrifies me. But I still love this comment Stan.
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