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The flickering neon lights seduce the young with their glow. And flash sexual delights, hinting at things they can't show. Youth witnesses wrong and right through the optics of a teen. And searches the black of night for a world they've never seen. They quickly learn they've been fooled, by all the hype and glitter. And fighting tears, they get schooled, treated like back street litter. Exposed to degrees of fright, living shadows skulk and dart. And late at night, out of sight, their fantasies fall apart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/14/2018 2:18:00 PM
Great expression of how it is not so pretty behind all that glitters. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/14/2018 3:43:00 PM
Thanks Line, your visits are always welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/14/2015 8:32:00 AM
Emile, deep write. Enjoyed. SKAT
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Date: 11/14/2015 9:50:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 11/13/2015 10:12:00 AM
Very well written Emile, Gives the young an insight to all the bad things hid behind the scenes!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 11/13/2015 11:51:00 AM
Thanks Kevin, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 11/13/2015 10:07:00 AM
Wow, Emile! This piece is an insightful imagery of sadness..., jill
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Date: 11/13/2015 11:51:00 AM
Thanks Jill, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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