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Living My Island Dream - Rich


If I was rich and could live anywhere I wanted,
      I would buy my very own island on the St. Lawrence;
Somewhere between Ontario, Canada and New York,
            In the 1000 Islands, well it is actually 1,864 islands.

Oh yes, in the heart of islands I would live my dream,
      Talk about off the beaten track, not connected to land;
A retreat and a haven from the world and so unique,
           It would not be a river cottage but a huge mansion.

No rustic and charming for me but stunning and beautiful,
      Located in a deep water channel on a private island;
I would relax on my deck watching huge ships and boats,
            But the mainland would be a motorboat ride away.

And there I would find bike trails and hiking and markets,
      Wonderful restaurants, theatre and even a casino;
From my deck I could go fishing and have endless silence,
           I could swim from my own beach and go scuba driving.

There are many historic ship wrecks to go exploring,
      And the Boldt Castle, build for love, it is a tourist stop;
If I wanted to go to the United States there is a bridge,
           Or just be alone with my very own trees and nature.

I could take a river cruise to somewhere or lay in the shade,
     If I was rich then I could just write poems all day;
Oh I can just imagine how amazing it would be in the rain,
          And I would call my private island, Dreamer's Island.

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October 25, 2015

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For the contest, If You Were Rich, sponsor, Mystic Rose

Second Place
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A. Sharma Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 4:44 AM
Ah great work broken.. lovely pic .. big congrats on ur awesome win!
La France Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 8:50 AM
Upma, thank you so much for the congrats, appreciate ~
Scars Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 2:41 PM
WOW! Great job and congrats on your well deserved win Broken Wings!! The picture fit so well with your words. It flows beautifully :) -LU xxx *smiles*
La France Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 4:47 PM
Laura, thank you so much for the comment and the congrats, appreciate ~
Cheema Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 12:30 PM
Congrats Wings! And one day a company with a loved one would also be enjoyable on Dreamer's Island! Love
La France Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 1:09 PM
Balveen, thank you for the congrats, oh how I wish Dreamers Island was a reality ~
A  Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 12:22 AM
Broken, congrats... SKAT
La France Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Thank you ~
Lamoureux Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 8:58 PM
A beautiful part of our country. What a wonderful thought. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 12:14 AM
Richard, thanks for the nice comment and the congrats, appreciate ~
Roper Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 8:19 PM
Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 8:33 PM
Thank you so much Eve, appreciate ~
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 5:09 PM
wow, Constance, this is amazing how you describe such a place. I would love this one, just so the mansion had a maid. BIG congrats on a well deserved win.
La France Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 7:35 PM
Thanks Andrea, I wish it was true, I would love to be there on my private island right now ~
Allison Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 2:26 PM
I'm on my way on my cotton candy cloud:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 7:36 PM
Jan, oh I love my private island and want to be there right now
Y. Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 2:24 PM
BW, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 7:36 PM
Alexis, thanks for the congrats ~
Inman Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 8:28 PM
Great dream. Wouldn't it wonderful. Love the write.
La France Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 11:25 PM
Hi James, oh yes it would be wonderful, in fact I do not need a mansion, a little house on my own island would be great and you would be invited anytime ~
A   Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 11:07 PM
thank you for the nice reply
La France Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 12:52 PM
You are very welcome ~
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 1:26 PM
- Sounds awesome ...... hope you welcome visitors, B.W. :) - Lovely poem and dream :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 1:34 PM
Anne Lise, thanks for the visit, you are invited to my private island, not sure what we will do but the sky is the limit as I will be richy rich ~~
Boddie Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 10:26 AM
a private island for you....that sounds like a dream come true....I just hope richness won't make your pen lazy....because your words always inspire me like crazy....lol
La France Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 1:24 PM
Eric... oh it will never come true and anyways I not a material girl ~~
Trifiatis Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 8:37 AM
You made me homesick, Brocken Wings, for Canada is my second country where my family lives. Yes, I know the place and I would all heartedly agree that one could make all these beautiful dreams a reality. Marvelously written poem painted with the colors of a beautiful soul! A seven for your dream!
La France Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Thanks Demetrios, for the nice comment, so you have seen the houses on islands, some quaint cottages and some huge houses, one is the smallest island in the world and it has a small house on it and not much else ~
A   Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 12:01 AM
WOW, every line is rich. I especially love the name you will give your Island... Love LINDA
La France Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 7:54 AM
Thanks for visiting Linda, you are invited to Dreamer's Island anytime !
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 5:50 PM
fascinating write Broken Wings - personally I would hate the loneliness and Isolation - but we all seek different things in our lives - the image you posted does look idyllic:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 7:01 PM
Oh I am a bit of a loner and love silence and tranquility and don't forget I would be a boat ride away from people ~
La France Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 5:41 PM
In the 1000 Islands there are 'thousands' of small islands with homes on them with names like Friendly Island, Red Horse Island, Wolf Island, Water Island, Baby Island etc etc, I have always been fascinated with the idea of living on my very own island ~
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