Living It

Cold, shivering, sobbing The child rested in the caresses of trial Born to the world’s cruel malice Foreign touches leave her breathless Distress…confusion…adaption Grateful for the chance to live Bitter for what was and what could never be seen Dirty…so dirty Little hands that have been places no child would wander Trapped in an imagination only formed By reality’s free-fall… Into familiar, stark waters Deserving it was out of the picture Living it was ever her fate Something told her there was more Beyond that strong, wooden door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Collins Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 7:03 AM
Dear Laura - "Something told her there was more" Just a chance, just a chance. So many don't know that or come to find it. Soul stretching. love, Kathy
Thirtyseven Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 11:52 PM
I love the dread of what's beyond that door. But I'm scared of where your mind goes, or is it mine?
Thomas Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 5:08 AM
Wow very gripping write karen, love your mind!!! Cherie
Kilmer Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 5:39 PM
A beautiful write. Stark and chilling. I can only hope that what is beyond that door is the beauty of a life. Love it. ~Kilmer
Carroll Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 1:51 PM
Hi Laura, A truly heartfelt write...well done my friend.. Ken
Dey Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 11:44 AM
This is so good and deeply flows.loved it...
Tacito Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 3:07 PM
What a roller coaster. I had to read this a few times to wrap my head around this deeply significant, yet, layered message. Powerful work.
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