Living In a Dry Land

The who choose to live in a dry land
must live a very dry life---
too parched to sing, too dried out
by what they call 'reason' to see, 
to see they have made it hollow,
a partial thing, a blind thing....

They have made their world so arid
even hope itself is scorched, 
whilst the human is left desiccated, 
no wetness left for good or evil,
not even for the inscrutable miracle
of love---
for in their sere minds all life shrivels,
left withered, burnt fragments that
once were courage, honor, faith---
but now they see an empty desert
bounded by death, extinction, 
nothingness....

A man once came to them, in that 
barren land their seared souls had made 
and offered them water, water to make
green and lush once again the world--
all done with water, the holiest of water
that would lead them from a paradise
to Paradise....

A few drank of the water, the water of
life and hope and awareness and love,
the water of Eternity---
but the others refused it, and fearing 
the man who brought it so much,
they killed him.

Two thousand years later,
some drink from His water of Life,
and others chose a shriveled life,
too dry for hope, too dead for
meaning....


[posted on Easter Day, 2022]
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Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 9:54 PM
That's a powerful poem on Christ and the living waters.
Carber Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 11:04 AM
Thank you, Andrea
Agustin Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Thanks for sharing this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy of Christmas toward a prosperous New Year along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
Carber Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 5:31 PM
Thank you Beata--may you have a most blessed 2023!
Kendrick Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 1:44 PM
I am so glad that He gave us the gift of water, light and bread. I really enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara
Kamoonpuri Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 3:58 AM
Wow you've used all the words for dryness and dessert atmosphere in great metaphor. A scorched parched feel of the place conveyed swell in words. Kudos! Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
Carber Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 7:59 AM
Thank you!
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