Living and Other Ways To Die

Maybe he ate his vitamins and their minerals and oranges and apples all at once again and again
Or ran laughing down the rugged rocks of a ruthless reality
Maybe he flew singing up to the cold concrete ceiling on a chair
Or drank dated dark liquid from a damp factory dumpsite
People think his lungs liked lighting the lily-white smoke they lived on
And I’ve even heard he sullenly slit several sections of his wrists so he could sign a letter

Maybe he jumped joyfully in front of a jeep window that had Jesus joining hands with Judas for prayer
Or pressed the pallets out of the pistol till the pieces pierced his parched throat
Maybe he took tablets off the table till they took their toll
Or cut carelessly into his chest’s cave and coincidentally revealed his heart
People say he bashed his brains out with a baseball bat
And some are sure he sucked in air and sat still till his stomach swelled

I say he lived life and loved and loathed
Living always kills you too quickly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/29/2018 11:41:00 PM
"when the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" Hunter S Thompson...words to live by...nice Jasmine!
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Date: 10/29/2018 1:43:00 AM
Please carry on writing...gut wrenching word artistry has high impact on those of us who have dealt with tragedy. Repeatedly. When we want to cry " Enough!" there comes more....Our humanity is exposed, and we speak to others whose hearts and minds each out to " hear..." You are appreciated.
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 11/12/2018 2:22:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/30/2018 8:22:00 PM
Good one
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 11/12/2018 2:22:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 9/20/2018 7:07:00 PM
Hello Jasmine, I just read your poem. It is beautifully written. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 9/24/2018 3:19:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 8/23/2018 8:37:00 AM
This is moving in a vicerol way. Exceptional pen.
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 8/23/2018 8:28:00 PM
thank you!!
Date: 8/23/2018 12:28:00 AM
Brilliant. Fave.
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 8/23/2018 5:08:00 PM
Thanks Lawrence!
Date: 8/23/2018 12:07:00 AM
Jasmine, I loved your mesmerizing write that was brought home in your memorable last line!!
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 8/23/2018 5:08:00 PM
Thank you :)
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