Living Above Judgment

I walk beside someone men judged.
A person born differently…
A baby in its mother’s arms
Not quite male; not quite female.
A heart of gold, but not perfect.
A soul faithful to its creator…
Crying when fellowmen pain.
Hardships befalling life remain.
Childhood teasing for the “Freak”
Ridiculed by other boys.
Unable to walk down the street…

Loved and cherished by family.

Waxing strong in stature, 
Before long… adulthood came.
Name calling by many strangers.
And gestures meant to defame.
Judging one soul without knowing.
Not bothering to see the light.
While inside a spirit grew…
Steel gray eyes defending right.
Justice honored by one of might!
By day, or in the dark of night,
Able to walk down the street…

Loved and cherished by family.

Head held high true to self
Feelings out in the open, 
Never again closed in a shelf.
Many loves and many friends…
God’s love and strength did not end.
No more acting as if a natural male.
No more wanting to be female
(More loving hearts…it seemed.)
But walking tall beside me…living.
No more pretending, 
One soul; one self; one God; we…
(Soul mates finally together.)

Loved and cherished by family.

© February 1, 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/14/2011 5:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in Joe Flach's contest "Here Comes the Judge". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2011 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest. An impressive presentation.
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Date: 3/12/2011 2:35:00 PM
Dane you're the real deal! And so lucky to know the love you do and so are all who love YOU! Congrad's on your win. Hug "I" Light & Love
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Date: 3/11/2011 7:45:00 PM
This is one awesome write Dane. Loved its structure and matter. many congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/11/2011 12:37:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your fantastic win in Joe's cool contest my friend.. an expressive entry exciting to read.. enjoy your top ten win with luv...
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Date: 3/11/2011 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of Joe, Dane
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Date: 3/11/2011 11:30:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Dane Ann. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Kudos. Have a great weekend. xxxRalph
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Date: 3/11/2011 10:52:00 AM
This is so touching, Dane Ann. I hope you have shared it with your husband. Congratulations on your win in Joe's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/1/2011 9:16:00 AM
Beautiful creative write Dane Ann.. intense and dramatic lines of expression to impress the reader.. good luck in the contest my friend with this winning entry with luv..
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