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Living a Vagabond Life

Huddle in a corner of an opened boxcar rolling through meadows and golden crops In the melting gloom sits a vagabond who's clothes are caked in congeal, odour, filth. A wandering existence a choice of rootless alienation waves goodbye, goodbye to smoldering embers of outrage. 9/24/2017
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Date: 10/5/2017 4:42:00 PM
Great imagery in your fine poem, Eve. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/5/2017 12:41:00 PM
Eve, a very insightful write. I think we all have our ghosts that we run away from in one way or another.
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Date: 10/4/2017 11:19:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve on your win.
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Date: 10/4/2017 9:20:00 PM
Excellent write. Love the images of the poor vagabond. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/4/2017 6:10:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this well penned poem !
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Date: 9/27/2017 12:35:00 AM
Great imagery in this one, Eve. I really like it. Gosh, her contest is filling fast. I better get on the ball!!
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Date: 9/25/2017 10:38:00 AM
If we could walk in his shoes for a mile...what would we see?...great write my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/25/2017 8:53:00 AM
Very Interesting write, Eve. I wonder if it is always a choice. Good Lick !!!!
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Date: 9/25/2017 8:49:00 AM
This is very poetic Eve.. Great entry for the contest..
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Date: 9/25/2017 6:27:00 AM
You have written an exceptional write on the vagabond my friend! "who's clothes are caked in congeal, odour, filth." What a dynamic and explanatory line right there! I surely loved reading this amazing poem this morning! You have written a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/25/2017 6:08:00 AM
Excellent description, Eve, the final line is the best:)
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Date: 9/24/2017 10:56:00 PM
I see him in the box car ..you have articulated a life the vagabond lives! Best for a win!
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