Living

Quiet pool of living Water, surrounding green moss Saturated grows

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/1/2009 6:31:00 PM

nice one!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/1/2009 12:59:00 PM

water..the wonder of life! Good write! Light & Love

James Fraser

Date: 10/31/2009 8:42:00 AM

Sara, i agree with many of the other writers, your writes are getting better and better >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/31/2009 6:51:00 AM

Beautiful haiku Sara ... so vibrant with description.. keep on with it please ... your poems say so much... thankxxx for your special comments on my recent postings ... much appreciated.. Linda-Marie

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/31/2009 5:05:00 AM

Dear Sara, Great Haiku ALWAYS...HG SOUP MAIL CALL

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/31/2009 4:13:00 AM

Dear Sara, A very soothing Haiku Superbly done One can see YOUR awesome talent Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious comments ALWAYS...HG