Livin La Vida Loca


Oh, the memories of school days from the past,
Those high school days I will never forget;
Happy to recall those gym dances, oh what a blast !

All of us girls loved those dances with no regrets,
Crowding into the restrooms to fix hair and makeup;
Those high school days-  I will never forget !

Oh, for days, new dance steps we would dream up,
Then the day arrives and girls and boys fill the gym;
Crowding-  in the restrooms fixing hair and makeup !

Boys on one side, girls on the other, then I saw HIM,
Madonna was doing the Vogue and we did not move;
Then the day arrives-  and girls and boys fill the gym !

I was ready to show off my attire and my groove,
Then, it happened, Jennifer was singing, Lets Get Loud,
Madonna was doing the Vogue- and we did not move !

Then, I was Livin La Vida Loca, I was on a cloud,
Oh, the memories of school days-  from the past;
Then it happened Jennifer was singing, Lets Get Loud,
Happy to recall those gyms dances, oh what a blast !

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February 4, 2016

Poetry/Terzanelle/Livin La Vida Loca
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For the contest, Lets Hear It,
sponsor, Judy Konos

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 2/11/2016 4:52:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Broken.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/11/2016 9:22:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the congrats and the awesome, you are amazing to me !
Date: 2/11/2016 2:45:00 AM
Congratulations on this win with a cleverly written poem. I enjoyed.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/11/2016 9:23:00 AM
Susan, thanks for the congratulations and gosh I like that word cleverly, appreciate and happy you enjoyed it, not my usual sad write ~~
Date: 2/10/2016 2:19:00 PM
Great memories Broken Wings - made me smile out disco's were the same girls on one side lads on the other lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 2/10/2016 4:38:00 PM
Jan, thanks for visitng and for the hugs ~
Date: 2/10/2016 12:40:00 PM
Anytime
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Date: 2/10/2016 8:25:00 AM
Broken,, congratulations on your Let's Hear It win. LINDA
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Constance La France
Date: 2/10/2016 11:59:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate !
Date: 2/8/2016 7:13:00 AM
Dancing is a great thing. A wonderful topic. How we move in mind and body. What I find interesting is that the poem is a celebration of that connection!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/8/2016 9:39:00 AM
Duke, thanks for visiting, I have always loved dancing, as soon as I hear music my feet are moving !
Date: 2/7/2016 6:01:00 PM
Such excellent write with such form...you've got such superb potentials, fantastic you BW...best of luck in the contest
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Constance La France
Date: 2/7/2016 6:03:00 PM
Sage, thanks for visiting with the excellent and the compliment, so grateful !
Date: 2/5/2016 5:28:00 PM
Glad to see you in a happy mood, Constance, reminiscing about the past! Those were the days...at least so far I can still remember about mine:) ~ Regards // paul
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Constance La France
Date: 2/5/2016 5:40:00 PM
Paul, I can be funny and happy, I have my moments, but of course my genre of writing is dark and sad... which does not equal unhappy... thanks for visiting !!
Date: 2/4/2016 8:37:00 PM
Lovely Terzanelle, sounds like a wonderful time.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/5/2016 9:19:00 AM
Come James lets get Livin la Vida Loca, , its a swirling good time, thanks for the lovely and the wonderful !!
Date: 2/4/2016 7:44:00 PM
Sounds like you did have a blast at school! I alas was too shy with the girls and just played basketball at prom with the other losers!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2016 7:56:00 PM
lol, that was so funny, oh my gosh, I needed a good laugh today, thanks for visiting Thomas, you are a blast !
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