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Lives Took a Change

We were lanky and thin back in 1971. Having the time of our lives. Oh, so much fun! One ended up married later with a wonderful child. The other woman disappeared on a spring day, so mild. We all suspected the guy she had been dating. Knew him as Lee, but she said our questions were grating. He was terribly secretive about his former life. We girlfriends suspected he might have a wife. He had a bad temper. We warned her too. She disappeared on a weekday, straight out of the blue. None of us had his number, but we all suspected him. The one to call the police was my cousin named Jim. She was a wonderful girl, a terrific cook a good friend. None of us know whether she is alive, or has met an untimely end. We have waited forty-nine years. Where can she be? If I see that scoundrel Lee I will tie him up to the nearest tree. We will ask him questions, and this time he had better answer them. The problem is if I met him on the street I might not recognize him.

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Date: 10/24/2020 10:18:00 AM
I hope she faired well! Perhaps we all have disappearences in life. There were two that were tracked down. Both safe and sound. God bless!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/24/2020 7:37:00 PM
It is amazing to me that a person can disappear. Like poof, gone, yet it happens.
Date: 10/24/2020 4:05:00 AM
I think many can relate to situation like this.. Sometimes I think back to people who have come and gone and situation that are still unclear..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/24/2020 7:37:00 PM
Yes that too. This was a physical disappearance.
Date: 10/23/2020 8:05:00 PM
A great write, Caren. A true mystery, indeed :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/24/2020 7:38:00 PM
I do adore a good mystery, unfortunately this was one of my best girlfriend's sister.

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