Paula Swanson Poet Rhyme

Little Tiny Jellyfish

Little tiny Jellyfish,
you look like gobs of snot.
Then I went and stepped on you
and found out your not.

Little tiny Jellyfish,
your kiss really hurts a lot.
Next time that I walk the beach,
on snot I will step not.




Nothing else I tried worked except for something silly.
For "Jellyfish at the Beach" contest
Hosted by Susan Mills
Placement: 7th place

For the contest: Any Funny Poem
Placement: 12th

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Carol Eastman July 16, 2011 at 11:01 AM This was hilarious!

Robert A. Dufresne July 16, 2011 at 4:15 AM well in this case silly is funny and it got me chuckling. Congrats to you Paula

Juanita Warden July 15, 2011 at 9:01 AM Congrats on your win,Paula.

Dr.Ram Mehta July 15, 2011 at 7:29 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of P.D., Paula

Kash Poet July 15, 2011 at 6:24 AM Congrats Paula on your win in P.D's contest..enjoyed very much.

Mike Dailey July 15, 2011 at 5:24 AM Congratulations Paula. Mike

Carol Sunshine Brown July 15, 2011 at 5:16 AM Congratulations Paula on the win in P.D.'s "Funny Poem" contest. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A July 14, 2011 at 10:25 PM , Congratulations on your FUNNY entry! Thank you for entering your awesome poem in my contest. Also thanks for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..p.d

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 14, 2011 at 9:28 PM Congrats Paula on your wonderful win in funny bone contest by PD with this witty creation my friend..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 19, 2010 at 8:12 AM Congratulations Paula on your well deserved win in Susan Mill's contest "Jellyfish at the Beach". Love, Carol

James Fraser July 18, 2010 at 8:12 AM Many congratulations Paula on your win in Susan's fine contest >> James

Cecil Hickman July 13, 2010 at 9:20 PM Very very cute and congratulations on your win,,and of course silly poems work too, and they are great,,your words are real and for sure true poetry,,Blessings..Cecil

Carolyn Devonshire July 13, 2010 at 4:58 PM Funny poem, Paula! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 13, 2010 at 3:34 PM Congrats Paula on your winning poem in the Jellyfish contest .. a great piece and terrific win for u to enjoy .. in a neat contest.. with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta July 11, 2010 at 5:44 AM A nice entry on the jellyfish on the beach. Good luck in the contest

Carrie Richards July 10, 2010 at 9:17 PM I thought mine was silly too.....I feel so much better after reading yours, Paula!!! Isn't it fun to be silly at our age??? I'd say it was keeping us young at heart!!! Besides...like you, ...I couldn't come up with anything serious when it came to jellyfish!! I love your poem!!! :) Makes me laugh!! So I'd say you have a winner here!!! Good luck!! `~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 10, 2010 at 8:49 PM HAHAHA ..oh Paula this is wonderful.. HAHAHA.. good luck in the contest.. a great write.. Susan will luv it.. with luv.. and your blogs are great.. I agree ..u should turn it into contest material... did u enter my Haiku sontest??? two spots open..luv..