Little Stars

As fireflies spark the sky, I think about my father. When I was young, and he was alive, we’d sit on the patio and watch fireflies fill the darkness. We talked well into the night, talks about little things that meant so much. Back then. Now, after a long day at work, I go back to a place where I pay room and board. I’m on my own, alone at nightfall as tiny lights flicker in front of me, and dance. I feel a sense of stillness, while shedding my years.  For a moment, I’m a child again.


stepping into void
visions seen by eyes grown young
little stars live on

July 17, 2022

Like a Child Poetry Contest
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Zahid Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 12:17 PM
Beautiful... Good luck in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 4:00 PM
coming back to this one, I like it so much. My haibun also included these wonderful lantern carriers.
Peck Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 9:51 AM
What wonderful memories of your talks with your dad, watching fireflies. Congrats on your win!
Anaya Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 1:12 PM
I love your take on the contest. Very sweet. Congratulations on your win David! ~Anaya
Alex Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 4:03 AM
"little stars live on" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Mcintosh Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 2:36 AM
Love this! Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 12:40 PM
So sweet!
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 11:58 AM
probably one of the best ones i have seen if for that one contest. I sure miss Iowa fireflies. they don't exist in Utah
Buhagiar Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 1:08 AM
Very beautiful Haibun. Loved it.
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