Little Girl

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She is my roly-poly play toy, ambassador of goodwill and joy. Wrapped in the softest ebony fur, she loves to sit in my lap and purr. She's the gentlest of Nature's creatures, I love her fury feline features. Sometimes, it seems all she wants to do, is to unblinkingly stare at you. She catches flies right out of the air, and feels like a cuddly teddy bear. When I leave, she meows with alarm, I don't mind; it's all part of her charm. She weighs twenty to twenty-five pounds and stealthily does her nightly rounds.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/27/2023 10:39:00 AM

So delightful Emile! Shadow is truly no shadow passing through your life! Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you and Shadow!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/27/2023 2:15:00 AM

Very sweet, Emile, congratulations:)

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/27/2023 9:17:00 AM

Thanks, Joanna, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/27/2023 12:16:00 AM

Thank you for entering this poetry contest Emile, and congratulations on your 1st place win! :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/27/2023 9:16:00 AM

Thanks, BJ, I appreciate both the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2019 6:42:00 PM

Love this, Emile!! Mine that died this year was black, but her diabetes put her 15 pounds down to six before we had her put to sleep. So sad! Congrats on your win.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/27/2023 9:15:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea, pets are a God send, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.