Little Cinderella

she paints lipstick
mother's red
on her sunken face
careful not to smear
the edges of tears
...a kiss upon her cheek

she tries to scrub
her unkempt soul
with the filth
upon the floor
her hands bloodied
trailed in pink suds

she watches
as she shines
the windows
tiny leaves twirling
gracefully
in autumn's breeze
as if in dance
with a prince

she dreams
of pumpkin carriages
drawn by horses
as she twirls thoughts
pretending the rags
are sunday's best dress

she gasps
beneath sobs
in heavy sighs
even "cinderella"
went to the ball

she shivers
beneath the chants
through the halls
where even the echoes  
have forgotten her name
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 9/25/2019 12:21:00 PM
"she shivers beneath the chants through the halls where even the echoes have forgotten her name" The words have gone a long way diving deep into me, stirring my emotions. My fave. Hugs from India.
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Date: 9/25/2019 5:29:00 PM
Thank you my new friend for your sweet comment and the honor of making it a fave of yours :) hugs
Date: 9/20/2019 12:41:00 PM
Poor Little Cinderella - no hope or vision, merely loneliness and hopelessness - I felt the desperation and the hurting in this poem Sandra - excellent write! No doubt a fave for me. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/20/2019 6:36:00 PM
Thank you for the honor of a fave and your kind words...not all fairy tales can have happy endings :) hugs
Date: 9/20/2019 8:00:00 AM
Sadness echoes throughout..I was hoping for a glimpse of happiness in her life..your words make an impact, Sandy..just as intended..the ending hurts! Great poetry!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2019 8:23:00 AM
Thank you my friend.. a happy ending from a fairytale would have been too predictable and made less of an impact :) hugs
Date: 9/20/2019 6:53:00 AM
I see you posted this last night and I am so happy it didn't revert back into a blank screen when the clocks struck midnight, because I get to read it this morning. The loneliness is this is heavy, the desire to be more, to be accepted and to be remembered is heartbreaking to read. But, I did find a glass slipper this morning...could this be yours? : )
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Date: 9/20/2019 7:12:00 AM
It must’ve washed upon the sands of distant lands... perhaps you found it on one of your romantic strolls ... thanks for the wonderful comment my friend it brought a smile :) hugs
Date: 9/20/2019 1:46:00 AM
Amazing girl!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2019 8:21:00 AM
Thank you my friend :) hugs
Date: 9/19/2019 11:04:00 PM
...a kiss upon her cheek ~> x . Loved this piece. Sorrowful but a fav.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2019 8:20:00 AM
Thank you for the honor or a fave. My muse does better with sad deep writes :)
Date: 9/19/2019 9:07:00 PM
the echoes have forgotten her name... Oh my... I know these... echoes... They need to remember or have it beaten into their heads by gorillas that wear tuxedos and carry water to thirsty spiders in Death Valley. Hugs my friend. Hugs and more hugs. come to tea. We will have the best of times, talking about butterflies and painting sea shells. Ann
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Date: 9/19/2019 9:11:00 PM
lol thank for the giggles and unique comment...tea time sounds like fun...better hurry before i'm late...lets get those gorillas moving, the spiders can wait... hugs :)
Date: 9/19/2019 8:11:00 PM
Those last two stanzas pierce the heart to the quick. A truly unique, inspired write! ~ Gershon
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Date: 9/19/2019 8:41:00 PM
not so unique if you were "little cinderella" it was my nickname as a young child through my early teens...Thanks for the read and wonderful comment my friend :) hugs
Date: 9/19/2019 7:23:00 PM
Very nicely done.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/19/2019 8:00:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/19/2019 6:55:00 PM
I like the creativity...You gave her another color....
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/19/2019 6:57:00 PM
Thank you my friend...muse has been active lately...:) hugs
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