JC Brul Poet Free verse

Little Bubble

Come back,
come back to me
little sparkling bubble;
land on my cheek
before you burst and fade.

Or if you won't...
would you please
stay a little while
and let me see
smiling faces
through your reflection?

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Michelle Faulkner May 18, 2020 at 6:40 PM I like how delicate and hopeful this is, very pretty-

Jan Allison May 17, 2020 at 12:17 PM what charming imagery, reminds me of when I was a child!:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger April 16, 2020 at 8:10 PM This has an elusive dainty feeling that resembles a bubble.

Richard Lamoureux April 15, 2020 at 9:22 AM Allow it to float a little longer. ;0)

Kim Rodrigues April 15, 2020 at 8:26 AM On the fingertip...on the nose. I see a rainbow! Thanks, JCB!

Jc Hawkens April 14, 2020 at 8:36 PM There are fond memories evoked here. Reminds me of my childhood. Lovely poem. JC Hawkens

Paul Callus April 14, 2020 at 12:19 PM Short & sweet:) Like that bubble there are many things/moments in life which we need to appreciate before they vanish! ~ Regards // paul

John Watt April 13, 2020 at 7:05 PM Short and sweet, just like a little bubble!

Andrea Dietrich April 13, 2020 at 5:32 PM I enjoy your short sweet style of poetry

Gershon Wolf April 13, 2020 at 1:59 PM Bubble-licious. Can definitely picture this one! ~ Gershon JC Brul April 13, 2020 at 5:32 PM Thank you dear poet Gershon for your bubbly comment. Be safe and sound.