Mark Toney Poet Haibun

Little Brown Rabbit

For many months my wife and I have seen a little brown bunny frequent our back yard from a field in the back that has coyotes, foxes, deer, opossum and raccoons. It returns to the field each day and we always think it will be its last day.  But a few days later there it is again. A survivor for sure! 

little brown rabbit
in a field of coyotes-
hoppy survivor

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Heidi Sands June 16, 2018 at 4:50 AM I love this hoppy survivor! Written well :) Mark Toney June 16, 2018 at 9:03 PM Thank you, Heidi. The rabbit returned to the yard today for a few hours. Still a hoppy survivor :)

Michelle Faulkner May 24, 2018 at 8:59 AM love "hoppy survivor" - rooting for him! Mark Toney May 24, 2018 at 9:20 AM LOL -Thanks, Michelle!

Kim Rodrigues May 23, 2018 at 9:35 AM I can hear the music playing, “I will survive...hey...hey!” Thanks for your humorous comment on my poem “Mude” Hugs...Kim Mark Toney May 23, 2018 at 10:23 AM LOL -especially the "...hey...hey" :) You are very welcome!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 23, 2018 at 9:20 AM Nice! Lovely story and haiku :) xomo! Mark Toney May 23, 2018 at 10:21 AM Much appreciated, Maureen.