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For many months my wife and I have seen a little brown bunny
frequent our back yard from a field in the back that has coyotes,
foxes, deer, opossum and raccoons. It returns to the field each
day and we always think it will be its last day.  But a few days 
later there it is again   A survivor for sure! 
  

little brown rabbit in a field of coyotes- hoppy survivor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/16/2018 4:50:00 AM
I love this hoppy survivor! Written well :)
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Mark Toney
Date: 6/16/2018 9:03:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi. The rabbit returned to the yard today for a few hours. Still a hoppy survivor :)
Date: 5/24/2018 8:59:00 AM
love "hoppy survivor" - rooting for him!
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Mark Toney
Date: 5/24/2018 9:20:00 AM
LOL -Thanks, Michelle!
Date: 5/23/2018 9:35:00 AM
I can hear the music playing, “I will survive...hey...hey!” Thanks for your humorous comment on my poem “Mude” Hugs...Kim
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Mark Toney
Date: 5/23/2018 10:23:00 AM
LOL -especially the "...hey...hey" :) You are very welcome!
Date: 5/23/2018 9:20:00 AM
Nice! Lovely story and haiku :) xomo!
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Mark Toney
Date: 5/23/2018 10:21:00 AM
Much appreciated, Maureen.