Little Boy

Accusatory in your victory and  contemplated  insecurity, held down by your chains of  the inconsistency of reality...after the walk and before the run you brought me darkness and took away my sun. No more fun and I'm undone picking up the pieces from your chivalry, no clarity and high strung, I always thought you, my love, would be the one.

Catching a train to flee from my pain, while you're perfectly insane, obviously the same....
No more holding hands or walks on the beach, you so far out of reach, and me constrained,
after hearing your speech, you have no right to complain or sit down continue to preach.

Inside my soul, that used to be whole, is out of control from your weakness.. 
my heart you stole, and I'm left sleepless and so tired I'm tearless, as my life unfolds incompleteness...
My misery is taking a toll, your sanity is full of black and my mouth is suddenly speechless.

I will no longer beg, and when you're full of regret, I will never forget your ability to avoid..Now I do hope to be  less paranoid...your choice to neglect  and you think you're smarter than Freud. Throw away our polaroids, now I'm selectively annoyed, I won't let you destroy my peace or reject and collect my willingness to find joy. You are just a little boy with no intellect.

Written By: Laura Loo
Date Written: December 2, 2015 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/21/2015 2:50:00 AM
Sometimes when brushed aside from one side is a sign that there is another door opening for you.
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:56:00 AM
I enjoyed your firm words.
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Date: 12/4/2015 8:26:00 PM
Thank you Julia! Have a great weekend :)-lu *smiles* *hugs*
Date: 12/4/2015 8:56:00 AM
- Word from your heart, I will believe it has a lot of deep feelings Laura - Wonderful written! - Best wishes for a peaceful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2015 8:25:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :) You are always so sweet *smiles* -lu
Date: 12/3/2015 4:34:00 PM
Yes... we have all.. as woman encountered, if not been in a relationship with an emotionally immature person. A very talented write Laura #7 ~~X~~
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Date: 12/3/2015 7:28:00 PM
Thank you Kim :) -lu *smiles*
Date: 12/3/2015 3:29:00 PM
when you leave the little boys alone you can find the home where your heart can roam and once again be atoned of how it was wronged by those unanswered phones with your number shown because you already gave up your bone to a mere pretender on your throne....I obviously like that laura....;)
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Date: 12/3/2015 7:26:00 PM
Thank you Eric :) I love what you wrote above. I really enjoy writing this kind of poetry, and it looks like you do too. Thank you, have a blessed night ")-lu *smiles*
Date: 12/3/2015 10:42:00 AM
Very well written. A unique style (is that a prose-poetry combine?), emotion packed to perfection!-- Ravi
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Date: 12/3/2015 7:31:00 PM
Thank you Ravindran :) Honestly, I don't really know what to call this? I would say something like "rhyming-prose"? just like you said. I love this style though. Poe wrote poems this style too. Many thanks :)-lu *smiles*
Date: 12/3/2015 1:15:00 AM
such pain well expressed, laura.. soup mail!
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