Little Boy

Accusatory in your victory and  contemplated  insecurity, held down by your chains of  the inconsistency of reality...after the walk and before the run you brought me darkness and took away my sun. No more fun and I'm undone picking up the pieces from your chivalry, no clarity and high strung, I always thought you, my love, would be the one.

Catching a train to flee from my pain, while you're perfectly insane, obviously the same....
No more holding hands or walks on the beach, you so far out of reach, and me constrained,
after hearing your speech, you have no right to complain or sit down continue to preach.

Inside my soul, that used to be whole, is out of control from your weakness.. 
my heart you stole, and I'm left sleepless and so tired I'm tearless, as my life unfolds incompleteness...
My misery is taking a toll, your sanity is full of black and my mouth is suddenly speechless.

I will no longer beg, and when you're full of regret, I will never forget your ability to avoid..Now I do hope to be  less paranoid...your choice to neglect  and you think you're smarter than Freud. Throw away our polaroids, now I'm selectively annoyed, I won't let you destroy my peace or reject and collect my willingness to find joy. You are just a little boy with no intellect.

Written By: Laura Loo
Date Written: December 2, 2015 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Zubair Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 2:50 AM
Sometimes when brushed aside from one side is a sign that there is another door opening for you.
Ward Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 11:56 AM
I enjoyed your firm words.
Scars Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 8:26 PM
Thank you Julia! Have a great weekend :)-lu *smiles* *hugs*
Andresen Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 8:56 AM
- Word from your heart, I will believe it has a lot of deep feelings Laura - Wonderful written! - Best wishes for a peaceful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Scars Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 8:25 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :) You are always so sweet *smiles* -lu
Van Breda Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 4:34 PM
Yes... we have all.. as woman encountered, if not been in a relationship with an emotionally immature person. A very talented write Laura #7 ~~X~~
Scars Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 7:28 PM
Thank you Kim :) -lu *smiles*
Boddie Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 3:29 PM
when you leave the little boys alone you can find the home where your heart can roam and once again be atoned of how it was wronged by those unanswered phones with your number shown because you already gave up your bone to a mere pretender on your throne....I obviously like that laura....;)
Scars Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 7:26 PM
Thank you Eric :) I love what you wrote above. I really enjoy writing this kind of poetry, and it looks like you do too. Thank you, have a blessed night ")-lu *smiles*
Manghat Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 10:42 AM
Very well written. A unique style (is that a prose-poetry combine?), emotion packed to perfection!-- Ravi
Scars Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 7:31 PM
Thank you Ravindran :) Honestly, I don't really know what to call this? I would say something like "rhyming-prose"? just like you said. I love this style though. Poe wrote poems this style too. Many thanks :)-lu *smiles*
Onclaud Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 1:15 AM
such pain well expressed, laura.. soup mail!
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