Litany of Bees

Buzz, buzz, buzzing our work is never done;
gathering the nectar kissed by the sun.

Buzz, buzz, buzzing a familiar tune;
We sing in harmony, throughout the afternoon.

Buzz, buzz, buzzing in a magical ballet;
Our pockets filled with beads of gold, then we fly away.






May 28, 2022
For: Bee Creative Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Matt Caliri
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Date: 11/3/2024 4:13:00 PM
Ohhhh, my goodness, this would be an excellent song if put to music, for young children. It's fun and wonderful to say outloud. What a happy, fuzzy, fun poem that I am glad to have found. Hooray!
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Date: 6/26/2022 1:36:00 PM
This poem is really cute, and it made me smile. Even though I am allergic to bee stings, I can’t help but like bees themselves.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/27/2022 11:41:00 AM
Oh dear, not good to be allergic to bee stings....but glad you still appreciate the magical moments they bring. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette
Date: 6/2/2022 8:33:00 PM
Creative and cuter than cute. Love it! Great write, Paulette! ~ gw
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/3/2022 12:16:00 PM
Love those little creatures, they keep my garden alive! :)Paulette
Date: 6/1/2022 3:36:00 PM
A little treat you give us here Paulette, pockets filled with beads of gold then flying away, who’d of imagined such lines, Fantastic piece of bee personification, cheers David
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/2/2022 3:21:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it! Love those little bees! Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 5/29/2022 6:00:00 PM
So creative and descriptive--delightful, Paulette! Janice
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/30/2022 5:23:00 AM
Janice, glad you enjoyed it. I enjoy the delightful visit of bees to my garden; what better way than to pay tribute to them then a poem! :)Paulette
Date: 5/29/2022 1:23:00 PM
Paulette, you have written some very beautiful couplets. Your poem has a natural smooth flow. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, my friend.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/30/2022 5:21:00 AM
Lasaad, you always are so generous with your comments...Thank you, thank you, thank you. :)Paulette
Date: 5/29/2022 9:58:00 AM
Dear Paulette, what a charming sound of buzzing! You are so creative! Your visit to my page is delightful. Love ~ Mala
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/30/2022 5:21:00 AM
Thank you Mala~glad you enjoyed it~imagery tells a wonderful story, doesn't it? have a blessed day, my friend. :)Paulette
Date: 5/29/2022 9:36:00 AM
This is indeed sweet like the pollen they gather ! The buzzing sound adds to the rhythmic effect of the poem, Paulette !
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/30/2022 5:20:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it~Bees are such marvelous creatures, we cant live without them. :)Paulette
Date: 5/28/2022 11:35:00 PM
Nice rhythmic couplets, Paulette. The poem flowed smoothly. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/29/2022 4:26:00 AM
Lots of fun to watch busy bees at work~Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette
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