Paulette Calasibetta Poet Couplet

Litany of Bees

Buzz, buzz, buzzing our work is never done;
gathering the nectar kissed by the sun.

Buzz, buzz, buzzing a familiar tune;
We sing in harmony, throughout the afternoon.

Buzz, buzz, buzzing in a magical ballet;
Our pockets filled with beads of gold, then we fly away.






May 28, 2022
For: Bee Creative Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Matt Caliri
Rhymes validated on Rhymezone.com

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Marikate Kingston November 3, 2024 at 4:13 PM Ohhhh, my goodness, this would be an excellent song if put to music, for young children. It's fun and wonderful to say outloud. What a happy, fuzzy, fun poem that I am glad to have found. Hooray!

Jennifer Fenn June 26, 2022 at 1:36 PM This poem is really cute, and it made me smile. Even though I am allergic to bee stings, I can’t help but like bees themselves. Paulette Calasibetta June 27, 2022 at 11:41 AM Oh dear, not good to be allergic to bee stings....but glad you still appreciate the magical moments they bring. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette

Gershon Wolf June 2, 2022 at 8:33 PM Creative and cuter than cute. Love it! Great write, Paulette! ~ gw Paulette Calasibetta June 3, 2022 at 12:16 PM Love those little creatures, they keep my garden alive! :)Paulette

David Kavanagh June 1, 2022 at 3:36 PM A little treat you give us here Paulette, pockets filled with beads of gold then flying away, who’d of imagined such lines, Fantastic piece of bee personification, cheers David Paulette Calasibetta June 2, 2022 at 3:21 AM Glad you enjoyed it! Love those little bees! Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Janice Canerdy May 29, 2022 at 6:00 PM So creative and descriptive--delightful, Paulette! Janice Paulette Calasibetta May 30, 2022 at 5:23 AM Janice, glad you enjoyed it. I enjoy the delightful visit of bees to my garden; what better way than to pay tribute to them then a poem! :)Paulette

Sotto Poet May 29, 2022 at 1:23 PM Paulette, you have written some very beautiful couplets. Your poem has a natural smooth flow. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, my friend. Paulette Calasibetta May 30, 2022 at 5:21 AM Lasaad, you always are so generous with your comments...Thank you, thank you, thank you. :)Paulette

Malabika Ray Choudhury May 29, 2022 at 9:58 AM Dear Paulette, what a charming sound of buzzing! You are so creative! Your visit to my page is delightful. Love ~ Mala Paulette Calasibetta May 30, 2022 at 5:21 AM Thank you Mala~glad you enjoyed it~imagery tells a wonderful story, doesn't it? have a blessed day, my friend. :)Paulette

Valsa George May 29, 2022 at 9:36 AM This is indeed sweet like the pollen they gather ! The buzzing sound adds to the rhythmic effect of the poem, Paulette ! Paulette Calasibetta May 30, 2022 at 5:20 AM Glad you enjoyed it~Bees are such marvelous creatures, we cant live without them. :)Paulette

Bill Baker May 28, 2022 at 11:35 PM Nice rhythmic couplets, Paulette. The poem flowed smoothly. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill Paulette Calasibetta May 29, 2022 at 4:26 AM Lots of fun to watch busy bees at work~Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette