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LITANIES REHEARSING ADIEU Soft wheezes from crossbills and mistrel fusion pluck refrains from May blooms, train litanies rehearsing adieu pause unto biting cold out stretched wings to soar high! _______________________________________ ACTUAL FORM: Waltz Wave 1/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/3/4/3/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/1 syllables ***Sponsor Kim Merryman Contest Name Shall We Waltz? ++Placed 5th++ O.E. GUillermo 10:22 pm, June 13, 2015

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Verlena S. Walker

Date: 7/5/2015 1:59:00 AM

Beautiful Olive. A belated congratulations on your win... Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/22/2015 12:37:00 AM

Thank you so much Verlena.. =')!

Paul Callus

Date: 6/18/2015 1:28:00 PM

Hi Olive_eloi! Congratulations on another worthy win:) hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/26/2015 3:13:00 PM

Thanks much Paul!!hugs and hugs..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2015 11:24:00 PM

Yayyy, Olive, it's lovely seeing your poem on the winners' list. Love your topic. Congratulations.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/26/2015 3:12:00 PM

ThaNks Andie... =) weeeee!

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/17/2015 8:40:00 PM

Olive, congrats on your placement in my contest! You painted a lovely picture with your words! Well done! Love, Kim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/26/2015 1:10:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim I appreciate your kind comments and the placement.. :D!

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/16/2015 4:56:00 PM

Nice poem about our feathered friends! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/23/2015 3:26:00 PM

Peace and love too Matthew..thanks for the comment.. =)

Jack Horne

Date: 6/16/2015 10:06:00 AM

absolutely beautiful

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/19/2015 10:06:00 AM

thank you Jack =)

Len Gasun

Date: 6/16/2015 7:55:00 AM

I love your excellent poem with its special form my dearest amiga, Olive! Hope I can also try this form one day when time permits. Thank you so much for sharing. If this is for the contest, I'm sure it will do well. Thanks a lot as well for reading my poem, Prayertime Memries. God bless you. love lots and warm hugs, Leonora

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/19/2015 10:03:00 AM

Leonora amiga.. :D! thanks much for your always generous comments on my poem.. =) hugs and hugs!!!.=) God bless us all~ OLive Eloisa

James Fraser

Date: 6/15/2015 2:21:00 PM

The image goes delightfully with your lovely poem Olive. As with many here, I've not heard of this form, but it's sure worth a try ~ hugs //James xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/19/2015 10:00:00 AM

thank you so much James.. been busy these last days that i wasn't able to reply immediately.. thanks for the suggestion that I almost didn't consider... :D :P~hugs!! Olive ELoisa.. =)

Kilalo Mwashighadi

Date: 6/15/2015 9:26:00 AM

That's lyrical

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/17/2015 9:26:00 AM

thank you so much.. =)

Milton Robertson

Date: 6/15/2015 7:13:00 AM

You are a wonderful poet Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/16/2015 4:28:00 PM

You are wonderful too..

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/16/2015 4:26:00 PM

Thank you so much Milton... =)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/15/2015 2:36:00 AM

- Good morning from Norway, dear Olive - A beautiful poem, a form I could like to try - a 7 - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/15/2015 11:44:00 PM

Anne Lise my friend.. am glad that you like and somehow inspired you to try this form.. thank you so much.. ~olive eloisa hugs and xxx

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/14/2015 9:02:00 AM

Hello Olive Eloisa!! Like Paul, I'm unfamiliar with this poetic form, but will look it up. Your supporting picture with the lovely birds and Waltz Wave text are a powerful combination in both imagery and meaning. Very Well-Done!! A 7 + FAV for sure from me. Best Always, Gary

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/15/2015 8:44:00 PM

Gary thANK you so much for your generous comment... =) a fave is a wow... ~Olive Eloisa

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/14/2015 9:00:00 AM

When you have a chance check out our group poem, it is now finished.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/15/2015 7:45:00 PM

Thank you so much for condering me.. :=)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/14/2015 8:59:00 AM

Beautiful Olive!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/15/2015 10:32:00 AM

thank you so much Richard.. =)!

Paul Callus

Date: 6/14/2015 7:29:00 AM

Hi Olive_eloi! I'm not familiar with this form, but apart from that the content is delightful! It does go like waltz steps! I think I'll try them out while nobody is looking:) hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/14/2015 8:12:00 PM

Dearie Paul, like I said its suppose to be not like this but due to some secind read it turned out with this but am so pleased with the results...weeee thanks to my huge reader and commentor... =)~olive eloisa huggs!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/14/2015 2:25:00 AM

Excellent. Outstanding and well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/14/2015 9:22:00 AM

thank you so much Ravi.. =)

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/13/2015 7:45:00 PM

NOT FAMILIAR with that form but your words are fantastic my friend. Super 7 and a pleasure to read today.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/14/2015 9:19:00 AM

Robert, This poem originally isn't like this.. only I let another poet read it for me and then he got me making this one instead.. =)thanks much!

Constance La France

Date: 6/13/2015 7:29:00 PM

0live this is outstanding, so visual and lovely and thanks for visiting my poem, summer memory

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/14/2015 1:20:00 AM

Broken Wings, Actually I had hard time making an entry here.... cutting words making each line a bit surprising and keeping the reader to be on it is hard... =) With all my poems, since I've know poetry is a written painting,,, I so want that I always present a good visual.. plus some sounds in it.. actually bringing you there.. +) if possible!