Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

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Litanies Rehearsing Adieu

LITANIES REHEARSING ADIEU

Soft
wheezes
from
crossbills
and mistrel
fusion
pluck
refrains
from May blooms,
train litanies
rehearsing
adieu
pause
unto
biting cold
out stretched
wings
to soar
high!
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ACTUAL FORM: Waltz Wave
1/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/3/4/3/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/1 syllables

***Sponsor	Kim Merryman
Contest Name	Shall We Waltz? 
++Placed 5th++

O.E. GUillermo
10:22 pm, June 13, 2015

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Verlena S. Walker July 5, 2015 at 1:59 AM Beautiful Olive. A belated congratulations on your win... Verlena Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 22, 2015 at 12:37 AM Thank you so much Verlena.. =')!

Paul Callus June 18, 2015 at 1:28 PM Hi Olive_eloi! Congratulations on another worthy win:) hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 26, 2015 at 3:13 PM Thanks much Paul!!hugs and hugs..

Andrea Dietrich June 17, 2015 at 11:24 PM Yayyy, Olive, it's lovely seeing your poem on the winners' list. Love your topic. Congratulations. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 26, 2015 at 3:12 PM ThaNks Andie... =) weeeee!

Kim Merryman June 17, 2015 at 8:40 PM Olive, congrats on your placement in my contest! You painted a lovely picture with your words! Well done! Love, Kim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 26, 2015 at 1:10 AM Thank you so much Kim I appreciate your kind comments and the placement.. :D!

Matthew Anish June 16, 2015 at 4:56 PM Nice poem about our feathered friends! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 23, 2015 at 3:26 PM Peace and love too Matthew..thanks for the comment.. =)

Jack Horne June 16, 2015 at 10:06 AM absolutely beautiful Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 19, 2015 at 10:06 AM thank you Jack =)

Len Gasun June 16, 2015 at 7:55 AM I love your excellent poem with its special form my dearest amiga, Olive! Hope I can also try this form one day when time permits. Thank you so much for sharing. If this is for the contest, I'm sure it will do well. Thanks a lot as well for reading my poem, Prayertime Memries. God bless you. love lots and warm hugs, Leonora Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 19, 2015 at 10:03 AM Leonora amiga.. :D! thanks much for your always generous comments on my poem.. =) hugs and hugs!!!.=) God bless us all~ OLive Eloisa

James Fraser June 15, 2015 at 2:21 PM The image goes delightfully with your lovely poem Olive. As with many here, I've not heard of this form, but it's sure worth a try ~ hugs //James xxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 19, 2015 at 10:00 AM thank you so much James.. been busy these last days that i wasn't able to reply immediately.. thanks for the suggestion that I almost didn't consider... :D :P~hugs!! Olive ELoisa.. =)

Kilalo Mwashighadi June 15, 2015 at 9:26 AM That's lyrical Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 17, 2015 at 9:26 AM thank you so much.. =)

Milton Robertson June 15, 2015 at 7:13 AM You are a wonderful poet Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 16, 2015 at 4:28 PM You are wonderful too.. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 16, 2015 at 4:26 PM Thank you so much Milton... =)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 15, 2015 at 2:36 AM - Good morning from Norway, dear Olive - A beautiful poem, a form I could like to try - a 7 - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 15, 2015 at 11:44 PM Anne Lise my friend.. am glad that you like and somehow inspired you to try this form.. thank you so much.. ~olive eloisa hugs and xxx

Gary Bateman June 14, 2015 at 9:02 AM Hello Olive Eloisa!! Like Paul, I'm unfamiliar with this poetic form, but will look it up. Your supporting picture with the lovely birds and Waltz Wave text are a powerful combination in both imagery and meaning. Very Well-Done!! A 7 + FAV for sure from me. Best Always, Gary Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 15, 2015 at 8:44 PM Gary thANK you so much for your generous comment... =) a fave is a wow... ~Olive Eloisa

Richard Lamoureux June 14, 2015 at 9:00 AM When you have a chance check out our group poem, it is now finished. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 15, 2015 at 7:45 PM Thank you so much for condering me.. :=)

Richard Lamoureux June 14, 2015 at 8:59 AM Beautiful Olive! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 15, 2015 at 10:32 AM thank you so much Richard.. =)!

Paul Callus June 14, 2015 at 7:29 AM Hi Olive_eloi! I'm not familiar with this form, but apart from that the content is delightful! It does go like waltz steps! I think I'll try them out while nobody is looking:) hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 14, 2015 at 8:12 PM Dearie Paul, like I said its suppose to be not like this but due to some secind read it turned out with this but am so pleased with the results...weeee thanks to my huge reader and commentor... =)~olive eloisa huggs!

Ravi Sathasivam June 14, 2015 at 2:25 AM Excellent. Outstanding and well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 14, 2015 at 9:22 AM thank you so much Ravi.. =)

Robert Lindley June 13, 2015 at 7:45 PM NOT FAMILIAR with that form but your words are fantastic my friend. Super 7 and a pleasure to read today. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 14, 2015 at 9:19 AM Robert, This poem originally isn't like this.. only I let another poet read it for me and then he got me making this one instead.. =)thanks much!

Constance La France June 13, 2015 at 7:29 PM 0live this is outstanding, so visual and lovely and thanks for visiting my poem, summer memory Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 14, 2015 at 1:20 AM Broken Wings, Actually I had hard time making an entry here.... cutting words making each line a bit surprising and keeping the reader to be on it is hard... =) With all my poems, since I've know poetry is a written painting,,, I so want that I always present a good visual.. plus some sounds in it.. actually bringing you there.. +) if possible!