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Litanies Rehearsing Adieu

LITANIES REHEARSING ADIEU

Soft
wheezes
from
crossbills
and mistrel
fusion
pluck
refrains
from May blooms,
train litanies
rehearsing
adieu
pause
unto
biting cold
out stretched
wings
to soar
high!
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ACTUAL FORM: Waltz Wave
1/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/3/4/3/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/1 syllables

***Sponsor	Kim Merryman
Contest Name	Shall We Waltz? 
++Placed 5th++

O.E. GUillermo
10:22 pm, June 13, 2015

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Verlena S. Walker Date: 7/5/2015 1:59:00 AM Beautiful Olive. A belated congratulations on your win... Verlena Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/22/2015 12:37:00 AM Thank you so much Verlena.. =')!

Paul Callus Date: 6/18/2015 1:28:00 PM Hi Olive_eloi! Congratulations on another worthy win:) hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/26/2015 3:13:00 PM Thanks much Paul!!hugs and hugs..

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/17/2015 11:24:00 PM Yayyy, Olive, it's lovely seeing your poem on the winners' list. Love your topic. Congratulations. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/26/2015 3:12:00 PM ThaNks Andie... =) weeeee!

Kim Merryman Date: 6/17/2015 8:40:00 PM Olive, congrats on your placement in my contest! You painted a lovely picture with your words! Well done! Love, Kim Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/26/2015 1:10:00 AM Thank you so much Kim I appreciate your kind comments and the placement.. :D!

Matthew Anish Date: 6/16/2015 4:56:00 PM Nice poem about our feathered friends! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/23/2015 3:26:00 PM Peace and love too Matthew..thanks for the comment.. =)

Jack Horne Date: 6/16/2015 10:06:00 AM absolutely beautiful Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/19/2015 10:06:00 AM thank you Jack =)

Len Gasun Date: 6/16/2015 7:55:00 AM I love your excellent poem with its special form my dearest amiga, Olive! Hope I can also try this form one day when time permits. Thank you so much for sharing. If this is for the contest, I'm sure it will do well. Thanks a lot as well for reading my poem, Prayertime Memries. God bless you. love lots and warm hugs, Leonora Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/19/2015 10:03:00 AM Leonora amiga.. :D! thanks much for your always generous comments on my poem.. =) hugs and hugs!!!.=) God bless us all~ OLive Eloisa

James Fraser Date: 6/15/2015 2:21:00 PM The image goes delightfully with your lovely poem Olive. As with many here, I've not heard of this form, but it's sure worth a try ~ hugs //James xxx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/19/2015 10:00:00 AM thank you so much James.. been busy these last days that i wasn't able to reply immediately.. thanks for the suggestion that I almost didn't consider... :D :P~hugs!! Olive ELoisa.. =)

Kilalo Mwashighadi Date: 6/15/2015 9:26:00 AM That's lyrical Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/17/2015 9:26:00 AM thank you so much.. =)

Milton Robertson Date: 6/15/2015 7:13:00 AM You are a wonderful poet Olive Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/16/2015 4:28:00 PM You are wonderful too.. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/16/2015 4:26:00 PM Thank you so much Milton... =)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/15/2015 2:36:00 AM - Good morning from Norway, dear Olive - A beautiful poem, a form I could like to try - a 7 - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/15/2015 11:44:00 PM Anne Lise my friend.. am glad that you like and somehow inspired you to try this form.. thank you so much.. ~olive eloisa hugs and xxx

Gary Bateman Date: 6/14/2015 9:02:00 AM Hello Olive Eloisa!! Like Paul, I'm unfamiliar with this poetic form, but will look it up. Your supporting picture with the lovely birds and Waltz Wave text are a powerful combination in both imagery and meaning. Very Well-Done!! A 7 + FAV for sure from me. Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/15/2015 8:44:00 PM Gary thANK you so much for your generous comment... =) a fave is a wow... ~Olive Eloisa

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/14/2015 9:00:00 AM When you have a chance check out our group poem, it is now finished. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/15/2015 7:45:00 PM Thank you so much for condering me.. :=)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/14/2015 8:59:00 AM Beautiful Olive! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/15/2015 10:32:00 AM thank you so much Richard.. =)!

Paul Callus Date: 6/14/2015 7:29:00 AM Hi Olive_eloi! I'm not familiar with this form, but apart from that the content is delightful! It does go like waltz steps! I think I'll try them out while nobody is looking:) hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/14/2015 8:12:00 PM Dearie Paul, like I said its suppose to be not like this but due to some secind read it turned out with this but am so pleased with the results...weeee thanks to my huge reader and commentor... =)~olive eloisa huggs!

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/14/2015 2:25:00 AM Excellent. Outstanding and well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/14/2015 9:22:00 AM thank you so much Ravi.. =)

Robert Lindley Date: 6/13/2015 7:45:00 PM NOT FAMILIAR with that form but your words are fantastic my friend. Super 7 and a pleasure to read today. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/14/2015 9:19:00 AM Robert, This poem originally isn't like this.. only I let another poet read it for me and then he got me making this one instead.. =)thanks much!

Constance La France Date: 6/13/2015 7:29:00 PM 0live this is outstanding, so visual and lovely and thanks for visiting my poem, summer memory Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/14/2015 1:20:00 AM Broken Wings, Actually I had hard time making an entry here.... cutting words making each line a bit surprising and keeping the reader to be on it is hard... =) With all my poems, since I've know poetry is a written painting,,, I so want that I always present a good visual.. plus some sounds in it.. actually bringing you there.. +) if possible!