Listless

Bird song perks in the mind
as the gray haze drenches the horizon. 
It becomes harder and hard to think.
The monochromatic hours pass
from felt gray, slate gray, to black
And repeat.
The furnace hums. 
It is the only thing with heart. 
Hope of spring does not rise eternal.
It corrodes with the incessant rainfall.
Raw, wet, green, 
will the vivid dreams of lilac
ever stir to overwhelm the muffling 
need for down.
Plucked feathers poke through
cotton sheeting, injecting 
the cracked skin of age with longing. 
Longing …
for the heat of sunlight 
and the return of lemon yellow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Zzzzz Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 6:41 AM
A creative write. Strong, descriptive imagery. Very poetic.
Vh Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 5:27 PM
This is beautiful. Well done.
Anderson Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 8:31 AM
Wow...I love this poem Debbie...Jimmy
Richards Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 7:16 AM
Again.....I have to savor your lines....those last six lines leave me speechless.........how do you ever write in such unique....deeply felt...emotional metaphors...I will never know (just love this!) You are so underappreciated!
Devonshire Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 2:18 PM
Depression and the feeling of listlessness often do accompany age, Deb. Some young people feel the way you describe as well. Wouldn't it be nice to inject some light into each lonely soul's heart? Great work! Love, Carolyn
Mac Donald Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 4:43 AM
Hi Debbie! Spring is in no hurry here either...I suppose that's why they call it Sring...it keep bouncing. This piece made me look outside...the sun's out, but surrounded by a think layer of melting marshmallow clouds. Oh Spring, the time of beauty, and asparagus.:) Best to you Mikki
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