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Bird song perks in the mind as the gray haze drenches the horizon. It becomes harder and hard to think. The monochromatic hours pass from felt gray, slate gray, to black And repeat. The furnace hums. It is the only thing with heart. Hope of spring does not rise eternal. It corrodes with the incessant rainfall. Raw, wet, green, will the vivid dreams of lilac ever stir to overwhelm the muffling need for down. Plucked feathers poke through cotton sheeting, injecting the cracked skin of age with longing. Longing … for the heat of sunlight and the return of lemon yellow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/14/2011 6:41:00 AM
A creative write. Strong, descriptive imagery. Very poetic.
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Date: 5/1/2011 5:27:00 PM
This is beautiful. Well done.
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:31:00 AM
Wow...I love this poem Debbie...Jimmy
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Date: 4/26/2011 7:16:00 AM
Again.....I have to savor your lines....those last six lines leave me speechless.........how do you ever write in such unique....deeply felt...emotional metaphors...I will never know (just love this!) You are so underappreciated!
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Date: 4/25/2011 8:28:00 PM
This has got to be third person~you have to much fire to feel this way///although we all long for the lemon yellow sun....//for me, It is the strangest feeling to write back and forth without ever meeting in the flesh, it's almost like a "stream of consciousness" It just seems I know you more than I do....????Re:poem, I'm glad you enjoyed my stream.....//may your lemon sunlight arrive sooooon...god bless~Rick
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Date: 4/25/2011 2:18:00 PM
Depression and the feeling of listlessness often do accompany age, Deb. Some young people feel the way you describe as well. Wouldn't it be nice to inject some light into each lonely soul's heart? Great work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/25/2011 4:43:00 AM
Hi Debbie! Spring is in no hurry here either...I suppose that's why they call it Sring...it keep bouncing. This piece made me look outside...the sun's out, but surrounded by a think layer of melting marshmallow clouds. Oh Spring, the time of beauty, and asparagus.:) Best to you Mikki
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