Listening to the wind

A lonely wind tells me its secrets
Treats me to its scented memories
Apologizes for its inconsistencies 
While hiding in a slow rising fog

She claims she is but a pawn
Held hostage by the sun and sea
Warm vapors stir the forming clouds
Icy waters chill the air below

The battle sweeps her into its path
Spins her in a tornadic dance
An unseen sun calls the devils tune
A drumroll as warming waters roil

And yet her sister lifts a falling leaf
Sets it gently on a chilling lawn
Riffles the marching rows of corn
Colors the cheeks of school bound children

Thus, she bids a hurried farewell
For stillness is the harbinger of fate
On leaving blows an icy kiss
As friends arrive in hoar frost coats
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Crandall Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 7:59 PM
Nice poem, it was interesting to hear about the confidences shared with you by the wind.
Daniels Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 7:11 PM
Delicate interpretation of Wind’s side of the story. I like how you said She feels she is a pawn, yet the poem clearly asserts her power in unobtrusive way. Her different identities are so clear in this offering, John. ThkU.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 4:27 PM
Wow, just wow....you captured the wind's spirit magnificently with your personfication and imagery. I especially liked: She claims she is but a pawn Held hostage by the sun and sea have to fave this one
Goldsmith Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 2:08 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Listening to the wind" write. I love listening to the wind and to the windchimes. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a Blessed day/weekend writing away..........
Ashley Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Ah just beautiful, John. Stirring imagery captures the spirit of the wind. I was especially struck by “riffles the marching rows of corn”. Vivid yet tender. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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