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Listening To God

Will you walk with me? I feel a change help me see One I should have made so long ago Will you talk with me and see me grow For if I don’t succeed in the journey I may fall into another lost eternity Help me leave my pain in the past My life is moving way to fast So Lord will you walk with me? Under the starving oak tree

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Diane Christian

Date: 5/2/2009 8:50:00 AM

thaqnks for your kind comments on my poem your great love for me, the Lord will be with you everywhere my friend a poem full of devotion from your heart, God bless you from diane

Edward Orozco

Date: 4/15/2009 10:51:00 AM

He will! Seek his kingdom. -darkpoet

Tulisha Blackshear

Date: 4/11/2009 9:00:00 PM

how lovely. I really love this=="for if I don't succeed in the journey, I may fall into another lost eternity" WOW very deep, HAPPY EASTER my dear

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2009 5:47:00 PM

He is always walking with us, Laura. Just open your heart and reach out to Him. Lovely poem!

Veronica Joseph

Date: 4/8/2009 12:15:00 PM

I know he has his hand on your shoulder, Laura....

John Rhinem

Date: 4/7/2009 5:24:00 PM

....So, "You" keep Your eyes and Your ears open "Dear Laura," and don't worry about anything, (James 4:7,8) for I have 'no doubts,' that "You" are going to be just fine!!!:):)~"My Love & Beyond Always To 'You Dear, And Alll Whom You Love,' Forever & Eternally, John!!!"~Bye Beautiful Laura:):) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 4/7/2009 5:17:00 PM

Smile~"Of course He will dear!!!:):)~"Hello Again Precious, Gifted & Lovely Laura Mckenzie!!!":):)~What an absolutely soulful and sincere prayer that this is~the kind of which "God" truly seeks to hear!!!:):)~I too have been doing some communing with Him; especially as of late; but I always do!!!:):)~I sincerely wish that I could stand under that Oak Tree with "You" now~but I have a feeling, that "God" has already sent "An Angel Your Way!!!":):)....cont....

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/7/2009 12:35:00 PM

Hope all your prayers are answered Laura. So beautiful. Love, Shar

Diane Christian

Date: 4/7/2009 12:25:00 PM

aww nice, the Lord will walk with you anywhere, God less you from diane

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/7/2009 11:56:00 AM

Nice lyric Laura, a remarkable psalm from your heart. Great job...Raul

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/7/2009 10:21:00 AM

A prayer we can all keep close to our hearts, and use in times of struggle. Lovely, thoughtful, and hopeful. Blessings to you, Laura. ~ love, Carrie

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/7/2009 9:11:00 AM

Laura all we need to do is ask and he will be there - I know he is doing many miraculous things in the lives of my wife and I - hope he brings the comfort, joy, blessings and love into your life that he has to ours - God Bless, MJ

Brian Strand

Date: 4/7/2009 8:47:00 AM

He will in deed walk along your way Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Arany P.

Date: 4/7/2009 8:38:00 AM

excellent thought, Laura! ~ Arany

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/7/2009 8:25:00 AM

A beautiful psalm of innocense and desire. Love it!