Listening

I listen to him nodding to his beliefs held on sacred forms et al. . . wishing him away to chase swallowtails and cricket song
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Merryman Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 6:22 PM
A great tanka, Thomas! I like it! Love, Kim
La France Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 4:09 PM
Thomas, a wonderful tanka you have written, A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, beneath, yes I can believe that there could be an underground world on Mars
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