Listen to the Wind

Written: September 06, 2025, for contest sponsored by: Constance La France Quote: "On a day when the wind is perfect, the sail just needs to open, and the world is full of beauty". By Rumi ********* Listen—not with ears, but with aching skin, where whispers meander extreme within. The zephyr is not a cursory breeze, But divination along with the trees. It jiggled enigmatically from the stone and carved its ideology into this bone. It speaks in whispers and traumatized song, of where we're accurate, and what went wrong. Jaw-dropping stories in stillness and hum, of battles bewildered and those to come. It hurdles through periods, grief, and grace, leaving outward fingerprints on the face. It wears no enthrone, yet huddles the kings; It severs the tresses on buried things. So listen in not for roaring decree— But toward the breath underneath the plea. The wind will not delay, solicit, or steam, It is bombastic and allows you to stream. Zephyr adorns twigs and allows grass to gleam.
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La France Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 3:39 PM
Sotto, congratulations on your win in my contest, Listen to the Wind, with your beautiful poem, I love the music and quote also, blessings
Goldsmith Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful wind write. Have a blessed day with your win...........
George Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 9:24 PM
"It speaks in whispers and traumatized song, of where we're accurate, and what went wrong." The wind keeps whispering many things. Sometimes very instructive. ... sometimes reminding us of what went wrong. Your poem is powerful like a blowing wind. Congratulations dear friend on your first place win.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 5:52 PM
dearest Sotto-your poem has aptly and beautifully captured the wind with is many personalities! I especially liked the first verse "...The zephyr is not a cursory breeze, But divination along with the trees." I identify with those lines. Outstanding poem. Best wishes with the contest, Texas hugs, Sara
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 11:41 AM
Hello Sotto, i listen to the wind often. when at night when the wind is loud, i listen to it. it is a calming sound for me. it sooths me to sleep. I hope all is well with you. /Aloah! /Darlene/
Andresen Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 10:59 AM
- Beautifully described, Las... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Narain Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 10:13 AM
Nice poem. Seems like a winner.
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