Listen to the Wind

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For: LISTEN to the Wind Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
September 5, 2025
The wind is blowing softly like words spoken
in ancient temples built of stone, sharply hewn
from quarries dug in highland hills made barren 
by creatures come to claim the woodland cedars,
for sacrifice and beauty they were chosen
to entrance us in the tapestry of weavers,
the goddesses of destiny and devotion
to the patterns of the silken threads, attuned~
the Fates decree, and who are we to question?

Listen to the wind as it swirls around decayed
headstones, hear it laughing like a ghost of yore,
or is it stirring trouble like a goblin crazed,
come to torment those awaiting somber tidings
of life once colored joyful, but now unglazed
by pale spectors and surly death's grim reapers,
and so the seasons tumble onward through decades,
dumb to pleasure, love or laughter, ever after
in a place where hopeless drudgery remains~

Listen to the wind now wailing winter's warning.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 9/8/2025 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write. What a great picture. A wonderful ending and it will be coming true soon... Have a blessed day with your win...........
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Chetta Achara
Date: 9/8/2025 11:33:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 9/6/2025 6:45:00 AM
a poignant and powerful poem; the grief and sadness is graciously entwined in your imagerty and verse. Well done!
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Chetta Achara
Date: 9/6/2025 6:56:00 AM
Thank you. This is a long poem for me which is quite a challenge.
Date: 9/5/2025 9:44:00 PM
A haunting piece, where the wind shifts from sacred whispers to ghostly warnings, ending in a chilling call of winter.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 9/6/2025 6:27:00 AM
Thank you for you encouraging comments. I appreciate it.
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