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Listen To the Warm

"It happens just because we need to want, and to be wanted too, when love is here or gone to lie down in the darkness and... listen to the warm.” -Rod McKuen Listen to the Warm Listen to the Warm. Two souls in love makes one; memory of walking side by side holding each other's hand nourishing closeness and intimacy. I was just sixteen, young and innocent, but a woman grown, very much in love, you were twenty-one and a gentleman. We were committed to listen to our soul, and bringing out the best in each other. Our love grew like a dream that had come true with warmth of body and spirit entwined roots a part of this world filled with promise. We shared such a closeness in our new home, arms around each other beneath the stars. You would be so gentle not to break me with your sweet soft kisses and embraces under the heavens studded with bright stars. As time passed, our home started feeling small. We'd listen to the sounds of our children’s bare feet running through narrow halls as our family grew. Our world was a world perfect, there was nowhere else I wanted to be, but holding hands. Until our children grew and one by one started to leave our home. Through our golden years we learned it was a different world, with precious memories. It was just the two of us listening to whispers of children throughout our home. Then one day, you became ill; memories of the past started to fade. Holding you were the only things I wanted to do and feel your gentle sweet kisses like we used to share under the sweet dark night sky. Now my days spent listening to the warm. I kneel, lay a bouquet of fragrant white lilies where you lie shedding silent tears. 5/9/2016
This is dedicated to my loving in-laws Dennis & Marcy Johnston both passed Contest: Listen To The Warm Sponsor: Laura Loo
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Haight Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Such a lovely tribute to your dear in-laws, Eve. So wonderful is the relationship you had with them, and so beautiful is the loving relationship they had. Congratulations on your placement. Hugs, Sandra
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May 13, 2016 at 2:49 AM
Eve, Congratulations on your "Warm-Prose Contest Win" XOX ~LINDA~
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May 12, 2016 at 10:39 AM
lovely poem eve well done in the contest stephen x
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:02 AM
Thank you so very much, Stephen.
Dalei Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Dear Eve, Very romantic piece. Everything is perfect. Loved it............//:) hugs
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Thank you so very much for the inspiring compliment, Manmath. Hugs dear friend
Cheema Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 5:04 AM
OMG! Eve, my eyes are moist! congrats on your wonderful placement in Laura Loo's Listen To The Warm Prose Contest!
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 9:38 AM
Thank you, Balveen. I miss them they were more like parents .
La France Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 11:03 PM
M A G I C A L and this touched my heart deeply, congrats on you win
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Broken Wings , they touched my heart so much. I divorced their son and remarried and they loved my present husband as their own son. Hugs
Lane Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Adding the photographs makes this one seem so much more personal. I'm happy this one did so well.
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Thank you so very much, Lin, they touched my heart so much. Hugs
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May 11, 2016 at 7:44 PM
A great congrats on your win with this beautiful poem filled passion my lovely friend my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Thank you so very much for the inspiring compliment, BL, you are always so kind. Hugs dear friend
Dutta Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 1:44 PM
I can feel your emotion. i am touched. congrats Eve to win First Place
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Thank you so very much for the inspiring compliment, Anisha, you don't find people that will love you for what you are. Hugs dear friend
Grahamburglar Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 1:11 PM
You've a gift for capturing a lifetime of emotion in a handful of lines. This was touching. Congrats on your well-deserved placement in the contest. -G
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:05 AM
Thank you so very much for the inspiring compliment and the congratulation. Hugs dear friend
Scars Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 7:53 AM
This was awesome Eve, touched my heart and brought back memories of my young lovable years with Nick... thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your top placement :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:08 AM
I am honored to have been chosen, Laura, I fought in what to write because I really didn't understand, but thank you. Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 7:45 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..If based on your real life or of someone that you knew, there is real sadness at the end..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Thank you so very much for the inspiring compliment, Sara, they were my ex -in -laws. They were just wonderful couple with so much love for everyone. Hugs dear friend
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May 10, 2016 at 1:04 PM
- This is deeply moving ... - Thank you so much for this great share, Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Thank you so very much for the inspiring compliment, Anne-Lise . Hugs dear friend
Daniel Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 12:19 AM
Nice warm write:)
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Thank you so very much, Jo . Hugs
Lane Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 8:35 PM
This is a very tender love story, Eve, and you told it very well. hugs.
La France Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 7:33 PM
so sad and beautifully penned, loved it
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 7:13 PM
Oh Eve the ending is so heartbreaking I really wasn't expecting it - you took me on a such a realistic journey through life - absolutely brilliant my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 7:31 PM
Thank you, Jan, I was trying to relive my in laws life . a couple that were opposite but much in love . she was 80 when she passed he was 93 when he also passed . he took care of her to the end.
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