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Listen To the Warm

"It happens just because we need to want, and to be wanted too, when love is here or gone to lie down in the darkness and... listen to the warm.” -Rod McKuen Green eyes, dark hair, fair skin Where has he been? Oceans and oceans away I wait Will our history stay a clean slate? Invisible heart loving an invisible boy Is love truly only here to destroy? Borderline of hope is where I am at Please be here to give me a chat A man comes knocking to give me a letter Tell me now is there a way to make a broken heart better? In a different world if you were here You would make my grief disappear How unfortunate you’re the reason I can’t move on Why I cry my eyes out until the break of dawn Angel is what I am to you remember? Yet you were the one who hit a dead end in December How does the sky feel my friend? Always know you and I will never end

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/16/2024 1:56:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/8/2016 9:12:00 PM

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Skat A

Date: 5/8/2016 4:36:00 PM

Nica, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT