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Listen To the Warm

"It happens just because we need to want, and to be wanted too...when love is here or gone to lie down in the darkness and... listen to the warm.” -Rod McKuen
Listen to the Warm
It was warm that day, not too hot, not too cold
Our eyes met, my chest moved first in then out
consciously mimicking the motion of breathing but boy you took my breath away
we had gelato that day and when it came time I tried to pay, the look on your face was priceless
with very little protest I allowed you to have it your way, I was impressed
later you said to me you admired my independence
you loved how a woman so small could be so strong yet so warm, I reminded you of your mother
as I listened to you gush cuddled in your arms I felt at home the thought of your smile still melts me
In this moment I thought back to our first date how we walked, talked and laughed with ease
I recalled how quickly all my nerves, like butterflies, flew away
I fast forward in thought to you raving about how special and unbelievably cool I am
I still feel your warm meeting my warm creating our hot and now I stop.
The daydream had often in the dark is over and now I’m cold
I pull a second blanket atop of me as I roll on to my side to look at your side
I’m tired of thinking of the warm.
5/5/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/13/2016 2:52:00 AM
Kierra, Congratulations on your "Warm-Prose Contest Win" XOX ~LINDA~
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Kierra Toney
Date: 5/20/2016 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 5/11/2016 11:37:00 PM
so emotional, I love it and congrats on your win
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Kierra Toney
Date: 5/20/2016 5:38:00 PM
Thank you I'm glad you felt something from my work
Date: 5/11/2016 8:07:00 AM
Kierra, .thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Kierra Toney
Date: 5/20/2016 5:39:00 PM
Thank you for the opportunity. I'm glad you were able to connect to my poem!
Date: 5/7/2016 10:58:00 AM
Kierra Toney, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Kierra Toney
Date: 5/20/2016 5:39:00 PM
Thank you for the welcome I will be visiting your page soon!
Date: 5/5/2016 10:42:00 PM
Kierra, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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Kierra Toney
Date: 5/6/2016 5:48:00 AM
Thank you for the welcome! *hugs
Date: 5/5/2016 10:09:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Kierra.
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Kierra Toney
Date: 5/6/2016 5:48:00 AM
Thank you for the welcome!
Date: 5/5/2016 3:13:00 PM
Kierra,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Kierra Toney
Date: 5/6/2016 5:47:00 AM
Thank you for the welcome! I've been writing poetry for self therapy forever but I figured I'd start to share it with others now for fun. *hugs

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