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When I first met you and looked into your eyes I couldn't deny the feeling I'd been here before Like I was remembering you from long age I had a feeling of familiarity, A feeling of home, Of calm and comfort, A comfy pair of sweats, The first day of spring, The first sip of coffee in the morning, My mother hugging me, Fond childhood memories, My dog greeting me when I come home, The full moon in the night sky, Freshly mowed grass, Birds greeting a new day, Children laughing, Ice cream on a hot day, A warm breeze across my skin, A golden sunrise, Driving with the windows down, Walking barefoot in the sand, Catching snowflakes on my tongue, Holding my sister's hand, Waves rolling in the ocean, Roasting marshmallows over a fire, Rainbows after a summer storm, Cotton candy, The smell of warm apple pie, Dancing in the rain, Static electricity, Fireworks on the 4th of July, Wind blowing through the leaves, Butterflies in my stomach, The beating of a drum, A strong connection, A feeling of forever July 23rd, 2019 Writing challenge 3, July 2019 Dear Heart

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Date: 1/15/2020 3:25:00 PM
Christine, this brought to mind SO many happy memories of carefree summer days... I can almost taste the roasted marshmallows! I miss you on Soup - I hope you are still writing, and more importantly, I hope all is well. Blessings ~ John
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Christine Saputo
Date: 3/5/2020 5:17:00 PM
Thank you, John. So glad it brought you such fond memories. I am still writing. I know I need to start posting here again. All is well here. Hope you are doing good. Thank you for your support. Many blessings to you - Christine
Date: 8/12/2019 7:21:00 PM
Christine congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write
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Christine Saputo
Date: 8/13/2019 4:27:00 PM
Thank you! It's been a while since I entered one of they contests here. I enjoyed writing my poem for this one. :)
Date: 8/8/2019 9:37:00 PM
Nicely done, Christine! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Christine Saputo
Date: 8/9/2019 5:57:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! Blessings to you also! :)
Date: 8/8/2019 4:14:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Christine :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Christine Saputo
Date: 8/9/2019 5:58:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :)

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