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Liquor of Love

Gestures beckon gestures, Speech caresses silence, Laughter accompanies the seductive sways of smiles, The beautiful bliss of our starry eyes gone astray; Then caught and locked in a stir of longing for each other. None, but a tale of fantasy, Re-enacting the dé·jà vu of a dream. A dream; an all-discerning vision Relentlessly unfolding a heart-stricken revelation. An exposition of the future’s past. Relishing; this past, indeed. In a one we go a-dancing; Yet still, in exchange of smothering kisses, beneath the cover of darkness With flames of a soaring passion burning; our bonded souls to sooth Urging the sweet cravings of yearning desires, us to consume In our intoxicating state of peaked pleasure, In our hypnotizing exile of uncontrollable ecstasy. How soon this liquor of love runs out Pour me another glass, please…… A toast, in honor of our non-existing love Cheers!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/17/2021 4:51:00 AM
This is brilliant, Eunice! Take care, Fiifi
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Date: 10/9/2009 9:55:00 AM
this is really good. good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/26/2009 10:41:00 AM
Eunice, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/26/2009 12:20:00 AM
My sincerest appreciation to you all for your inspiring comments. Thank you.
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Date: 9/25/2009 11:20:00 PM
Congrates on your wonderful poem going through to the final ... Love Jayne
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Date: 9/24/2009 5:22:00 PM
Dear Eunice, Best wishes through to the next round. Lainie
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:58:00 PM
Eunice, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:41:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Eunice.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2009 6:42:00 PM
Very beautiful, Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 8/6/2009 8:19:00 AM
Awesome write here, Eunice and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!!
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:23:00 PM
Eunice congratulations on having your poetry featured - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/3/2009 4:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week . Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 1:13:00 PM
congrats on your feature write.......:JP]
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:12:00 AM
Thank-you all for your wonderful comments and compliments. To all who are yet to comment also i still say thank-you in advance.
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:02:00 AM
Eunice,.. this is a beautiful poem dear poet !!! Congratulations on its feature this week !!! james
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Date: 8/3/2009 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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Date: 4/19/2009 7:37:00 AM
This one makes me think. I faced the pangs of love fearlessly, hutingly, soberly. Then, I finally retreated to happiness and independence in a quiet part of the world. I hope that you are happy, too. God Bless you. Keep writing and welcome to poetry soup. Love, Dane
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Date: 4/12/2009 7:28:00 PM
Very good structure.
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Date: 4/11/2009 6:25:00 PM
Nice! I like this poem..... I likehow how everything is put and how the poem itself flows on and ends nicely. Great work.
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Date: 4/11/2009 3:50:00 PM
Nice work Eunice and welcome to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy your stay. Happy Easter...Raul
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